One Single Impression: Distractions (second)
dis the safe way down
tract go up little ridge . charged
ions halt tooth decay
.
tract go up little ridge . charged
ions halt tooth decay
.
Tag: One Single Impression Distractions,
prompted today by (thank you) Don't Take My Wings
Tag: Jim's OSI
Painting is easy when you don’t know how, but very difficult when you do. Edgar Dégas
The same goes for my poetry attempts (don't know how, but I enjoy it!).
Labels: One Single Impression, Poem
posted by Jim @ 12/14/2008 07:16:00 AM
8 comments
8 Comments:
Very cleverly done.
Well done, Jim!!
Well done, Jim =)
I say, better than the first!!
PS: Please do come and post at Monday Poetry Train Revisited. You will love to board it.
This is really nifty!
delightfully clever -- like how you used the popular slang meaning of "dis."
Aw, very well done.
Fun form!
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