Sunday, December 14, 2008

One Single Impression: Distractions (second)

dis the safe way down
tract go up little ridge
. charged
ions halt tooth decay

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Tag: One Single Impression Distractions,
prompted today by (thank you) Don't Take My Wings
Tag: Jim's OSI
Painting is easy when you don’t know how, but very difficult when you do. Edgar Dégas
The same goes for my poetry attempts (don't know how, but I enjoy it!).

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8 Comments:

At Sunday, December 14, 2008 2:39:00 PM, Blogger Raven said...

Very cleverly done.

 
At Sunday, December 14, 2008 2:46:00 PM, Blogger Sioux said...

Well done, Jim!!

 
At Sunday, December 14, 2008 5:39:00 PM, Blogger audrey` said...

Well done, Jim =)

 
At Monday, December 15, 2008 10:36:00 AM, Blogger gautami tripathy said...

I say, better than the first!!


PS: Please do come and post at Monday Poetry Train Revisited. You will love to board it.

 
At Monday, December 15, 2008 12:39:00 PM, Blogger Tumblewords: said...

This is really nifty!

 
At Monday, December 15, 2008 6:06:00 PM, Blogger Sue said...

delightfully clever -- like how you used the popular slang meaning of "dis."

 
At Tuesday, December 16, 2008 11:49:00 AM, Blogger Patois said...

Aw, very well done.

 
At Tuesday, December 16, 2008 12:30:00 PM, Blogger spacedlaw said...

Fun form!

 

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