Sunday, December 14, 2008

One Single Impression: Distractions

Distractions distracted
(a silly ditty using big words)

distractions plus subtractions
equals serious fractions
triggering strong reactions
amongst various factions

distractions less subtractions
equals coming abstractions
bringing happy contractions
uniting these same factions

action interactions

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Tag: One Single Impression Distractions,
prompted today by (thank you) Don't Take My Wings
Tag: Jim's OSI
Painting is easy when you don’t know how, but very difficult when you do. Edgar Dégas
The same goes for my poetry attempts (don't know how, but I enjoy it!).

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18 Comments:

At Sunday, December 14, 2008 1:25:00 AM, Anonymous gautami tripathy said...

And I liked all the actions in here!

:D

 
At Sunday, December 14, 2008 2:04:00 AM, Blogger Edward S Gault said...

Your poem was very distracting, but brought on those happy contractions-Thank you!

 
At Sunday, December 14, 2008 3:19:00 AM, Blogger spacedlaw said...

Good fun!

 
At Sunday, December 14, 2008 5:12:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

That was different, and very enjoyable.

 
At Sunday, December 14, 2008 5:31:00 AM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

That's math class all summed up for me!

 
At Sunday, December 14, 2008 6:21:00 AM, Blogger barbs.haiku said...

That was fun, Jim! Lots of action going on to keep us distracted!

 
At Sunday, December 14, 2008 10:56:00 AM, Blogger Beth P. said...

Hmmmm....and what of coming attractions?!

 
At Sunday, December 14, 2008 1:06:00 PM, Blogger Sandee (Comedy +) said...

Not participating, but wanted to say hello and have a great day. :)

 
At Sunday, December 14, 2008 1:54:00 PM, Anonymous Deborah Godin said...

What a fun ride!!

 
At Sunday, December 14, 2008 3:09:00 PM, OpenID fourwindshaiga said...

A good job of distracting, Jim!

 
At Sunday, December 14, 2008 3:48:00 PM, Anonymous Ray said...

This poem commits infractions.

 
At Monday, December 15, 2008 11:23:00 AM, Blogger Quiet Paths said...

Very fun and thanks for a good smile, Jim!

 
At Monday, December 15, 2008 12:40:00 PM, Blogger Tumblewords: said...

This one is clever, too!!

 
At Monday, December 15, 2008 6:07:00 PM, Blogger Sue said...

aren't words wonderful...all those lovely sounds rolling together.

 
At Monday, December 15, 2008 10:51:00 PM, Blogger DeLi said...

so witty-ly distracting... i love it!

 
At Wednesday, December 17, 2008 12:00:00 PM, Blogger Kathiesbirds said...

I happen to like this one the best of the two. Sounds like a rap song but I love the play of words!

 
At Wednesday, December 17, 2008 3:53:00 PM, Anonymous one more believer said...

a definite abstration of today's distraction...and it all makes such sense.. thank you

 
At Thursday, December 18, 2008 4:42:00 PM, Blogger mgirl said...

You are so clever with the words, I loved both of them. Thanks for the fun.

 

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