The Ride -- Life Goes On -- a Poem for Sunday Muse
“The Ghost Train,” 1953
The Ride; something special?
Ride of my life I'm looking for
Too old for ponies I was told
Truth comes hard not child any more
Life change, adolescents we were
Corny jokes tickles and pinches
Crushes, fickle loves and breakups
Come scarey tunnel of darkness
Moments getting more serious
Teens we learned every part of love
High school finished my grades were good
Way too young still, took our chances
Steamed romances settled on one
Will marriage be the ride for me
Cross my fingers hope for good choice
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- Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2022, All Rights Reserved
- Photo inspiration courtesy of Carrie as hosting The Sunday Muse #209,
- Her other choices today:
- All seemed to me to be stages of a woman's life. See Carrie's link above for their artist's credits.
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- I have written every day in April for National Poem Writing Month, I hope you can classify all as poems of sorts.
Each of the links below should pull up several writes from April 1 down to April 30 (today, 2022):
Labels: Fiction, Irregular rhyme, Love Story, Metaphorical Poem {??}, Poem, Sunday Muse 01, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 5/07/2022 03:25:00 PM
5 comments
5 Comments:
You wrote a good poem, and you made a wise and good choice in life Jim. Mrs. Jim I am sure is a true keeper. Happy Mother's Day to her!
“All seemed to me to be stages of a woman's life.“ ... That is very insightful.
“Corny jokes tickles and pinches” ... always the very best phase <3
'scary tunnels of darkness' - nice metaphor for what lies ahead ...
pleasant reminisces
You have a wonderful way of whisking me back to 'girlhood.'
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