Saturday, April 30, 2022

Flower Love -- NaPoWriMo 2023 Day 30

     Fleeting Love

She a window flower, 
and he a winter breeze *
Her early leaf's a flower 
but only so an hour ** 

He gives his harness bells a shake, 
and miles to go before I sleep ***
I could've died for love--
But for livin' I was born ****

Nobody knows this little Rose --
Did I not take it from the ways *****
If suddenly you forget me 
do not look for me, for I shall 
already have forgotten you  ****** 

 NOTES:  Line notes from their sources and URL's-- 
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 - Poem line sources Copyright, Jimmiehov 2022, All Rights Reserved 
 - I'm linked with NaPoWriMo 2022 Day 30 for the Prompt idea of writing a "Cento" form poem, 
 - The Cento borrows one line from several other poems to construct a poem of our own.  I chose the Flower Love theme to look for and use.  
 - References to other works are in the body notes above.
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1 Comments:

At Monday, May 02, 2022 8:32:00 AM, Blogger Penelope Notes said...

I like the mood … the fleetingness of life and the carelessness of a wind’s whim as “He gives his harness bells a shake”.

 

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