Four Stanza Riddle Senyru Group -- NaPoWriMo Day 23 -- a Spine Poem
The Start of Something Good
Such a quiet place
A bridge across the ocean
The Perfect Stranger
What am I tonight
"Robe of Many Colors"
Totally out of sight
Who is this stranger
You have seen me many times
Again not tonight
I am the rainbow
Afternoons after the rains
Delight for the world
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- Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2022, All Rights Reserved
- "Write a Riddle Poem" puzzle prompt by Djorn, dVerse, p
- I am linked too with Magaly at the Friday Writings #23,
- I am also linked with NaPoWriMo 2022 Day 22, https://www.napowrimo.net/day-twenty-two-8/ ,
for a requested use of repetition. Here I only used it once, "afternoon, after ..."
The Books:
the start of something good -- Jennifer Probst
Such a quiet place -- Megan Miranda
A bridge across an ocean -- Susan Moissner
The perfect stranger -- Megan Miranda
Labels: dVerse prompt, NaPoWriMo 2022c, Poem, Riddle Poem, Senryū, Spine Poem
posted by Jim @ 4/22/2022 01:23:00 AM
16 comments
16 Comments:
Ooooo, I suspect a rainbow[?]
It was easy though you are Good!!!
I am not allowed to comment on yours. Being coerced into "conforming"?
I would have said, "First I was thinking pig. But the lamb(s) would be better. I don't eat lamb, deer, or veal."
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I was a bit slow so had to look at the comments - good one!
Dreams.
Jim! A great riddle poem. Well done .... love the visual.
Rainbows are a delight. Loved the riddle poem
Rainbow — cool Jim!
A wonderful use of these titles!
Rainbow! You made it easy.
so very clever use of the titles for this beautiful riddle poem.. I combined the riddle prompt as well today for day 22 here
Rainbows are a delight to find.
Hi, Jim! So glad to see you again. It’s been a long while. I think it was ABC Thursday. I like your poem, loved the way you lead us to the rainbow.
Beautiful Rainbows are a delight
Loved how you use the book titles.
I was thinking of a lighthouse but the "robe of many colors" threw me off, and then i saw the answer.
Wonderful... and the rainbow sounds right
enjoyed the delightful lines.
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