Memory Peeks -- NaPoWriM 2022 Day 21 # 2 poem
If My Memory Serves
Eleanor was her name *
We dated our first with
each other, night was brisk.
I had my dad's pickup
Broken foot couldn't walk
After the show we parked
We parked and talked and talked
She sat so close to me
made me nervous, sort of
Then she came closer still
felt she wanted to kiss
Eleanor was my first,
only to kiss a girl
who left her glasses on
She didn't take them off
She worked on the sixth floor
of the watch factory
while I was on the third
I don't know what she did
I ran six screw machines
automatic screw machines
I kept the rods coming
and made sure blades were sharp
Eleanor and I stayed
apart, no dates again
Me? Went in the Army
She? Moved back to her town
Never saw her again
No letters passed by us
I've forgotten her name *
One of few can't look up
Army educated
it educated me
Went to France learned of Gogh
St. Remy "Olive Grove"
I snapped a picture there
Picture, his Olive Grove
Matched it with his painting
Scene I'll never forget
Memories, precious ones
Some parts I've forgotten
But remember enough
'Nuff to keep me happy
Would I ever attempt,
try to fill empty holes?
[By Van Gogh, click for larger view]
NOTES:
* (1) Eleanor I'm sure was not her name. I really cannot and probably never will remember her name.
(2) All this is true except that in the Army I DID NOT GO TO FRANCE. I spent my five years all in ElPaso, Texas, at Fort Bliss. Later, Mrs. Jim and I holidayed in France. The Olive Grove is across the street from his Sanatorian at the edge of town, St. Remy, Provence, France.
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- Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2006 and 2022, All Rights Reserved
- I'm linked with NaPoWriMo Day Twenty-one,
- This prompt asks you to write a poem in which:
(1) you first recall someone you used to know closely but are no longer in touch with;
(2) then a job you used to have but no longer do;
(3) and then a piece of art that you saw once and that has stuck with you over time; and
(4) finally, close the poem with an unanswerable question.
Happy writing!
Labels: art, France, Jim Does, Jim's Life, NaPoWriMo 2022c, Poem
7 Comments:
I guess we should be grateful for what we remember. Very pertinent question. Well done
Omg Your poem's expressed a lovely meet-cute in the start! A special memory for sure, awww I smiled while reading your poem but is it fiction?
A sweet poem, Jim!
I love this SO much. Especially this:
“Eleanor was my first,
only to kiss a girl
who left her glasses on”
Excellent tale. I do long for the simpler, though harder, factory days. It is heavy on my heart, all these kids graduating from high school and having to worry about where they belong. I worry about all the jobs that once were not being there anymore—for people who want to use their bodies.
(Sorry for the tangent; my oldest is graduating in a few weeks.)
Thoroughly enjoyed reading this.
You can't beat van Gogh for inspiration. And lessons in love.
Loved reading your poem Jim. Vincent's mention brought me to it:) His work connects and inspires.
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