Our Outhouse
Too bad the tree fell on it. Of course no one was inside, just a whole lot of memories left there waiting.
Dad made this two holer, you can buy a brand new 
one in kit form for around $449.00. Go here 
The light and the dark 
I've seen London and I've seen France 
I like sunshine and hate the dark 
Lamp lights okay, nightlights to sleep 
Am I afraid, fearing the dark 
Superstitious? That I am not 
Under ladders, there I won't walk 
Nor let black cats to cross my path 
For them I'll dodge, go other way 
It all started when I was small 
Outhouse was back, back in the grove 
Twas back behind--Mom's chicken house 
When it was dark--Sister's along 
All that to say "I hate the dark"
I'm still that way, flashlights do help 
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 - Photo and Poem Copywrite, Jimmiehov 2009 (out house photo, [click here]) and 2023, All Rights Reserved    - I'm linked with Rosemary for the Prompt phrase at the Friday Writings #69 at  
Notes: 
 - Rosemary has invited us to write about “darkness and light.”
 - The photo is of our outhouse toilet when I was growing up on the farm.  A tree has fallen on it now.  You can buy a brand new one in kit form for around $449.00. Go here  - Although I say that I'm not superstitious, when I was teaching, I numbered my tests and mixed the questions differently for odd/even rows.  I also numbered each question pamphlet; I would exchange number 13 for number 43.  My students didn't know that had occurred, therefore if by chance that student was concerned, he/she would not worry about having number thirteen.  
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Labels: dark poetry, Friday Writings, Half Truth, Home, Jim's Life, Syllabic Form
    
     
    
  
  
8 Comments:
Childhood nightmares stay forever. I can empathize with you.
Those old outhouses were scary as!
I've only used outhouses on rustic camping trips, but that was all I needed to appreciate the nightlight in my non-creaky bathroom so much more.
Oh Mr. Jim I love this!!! Memories of trembling hand trying to steady my flashlight, making my way to my grandparent's outhouse. Cheers.
I never was scared OF the dark, but as a small child of nomadic parents I was often scared of new places IN the dark.
Wow... totally agree.. childhood fears tend to stay and creep out at the worst of times.
That was so honest. Liked the way the lines opened to a reality fact
I still have to sleep with a light on, and a flashlight nearby incase of blackouts. (Sara)
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