Shay's Word Garden -- Outside the Saloon
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Boathouse Retreat
Twilight Weavers
play on
Saturday night
Bitter axe makes
for
colder daydreams
Indigenous saying,
recall
"Outside Saloon"
Getting colder,
lingered,
apples frozen
Mend big mistake
lit the
dewy-eyed lamp
Rainy muskeg,
records the
boathouse retreat
_ _ _
- Poem and Photo Copyright, Jimmiehov 2013* and 2022, All Rights Reserved
- I'm linked with Shay at her Word Garden for her Word List 13 Prompts, at
http://fireblossom-wordgarden.blogspot.com/2022/02/word-garden-word-list-13-gordon.html?m=1 . She instructed us to use at least three.
- Shay's Word List 13 from Gordon Lighthouse songs:
dewy-eyed lamp lingered mend mistake muskeg
outside rainy recall records saloon Saturday
apples axe bitter boathouse colder daydreams
twilight weavers
- Shay's Word List 13 from Gordon Lighthouse songs:
dewy-eyed lamp lingered mend mistake muskeg
outside rainy recall records saloon Saturday
apples axe bitter boathouse colder daydreams
twilight weavers
(I used all Twenty Words!!)
- *Note: Photo, Jim's 2013 (http://jimmiehov.blogspot.com/2013/01/my-alphabe-thursday-2nd-letter-i.html
.
Labels: Poem, Story, Story Poem, Syllabic Form, Things to know, Word List 01
5 Comments:
All 20 words! You were ambitious this time, Jim.
The most I can manage this time around ~~ three! And I am still working on it! Cheers.
Congratulations!
What a fun read and with all the words too!!
well done jim. i like how each stanza makes an interesting image, connected and discontented from the rest at the same time... a good read. personally, i liked this one best:
"Bitter axe makes
for
colder daydreams"
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