an unusual Fish Story, true I say
Betsy lives in a tree
My fish lives in a tree
Not the way I would choose
She's a mind of her own
Tell you about my fish
Her name is Betsy Dear
Gave to me by Kellie
my youngest granddaughter
Betsy was hers at first
Misses and she found her
In the pet store down there
at the end of our street
Shiny black Betta fish
Fairly cheap she came here
Betta fish are two or three
or five or ten dollars
Class you buy high or low
At first she had no tree
and slept in her sand box
Kind Misses bought her one
A small tree just her own
She sleeps and swims around
All day long doing that
Come morn I lift her hood
She stays in the tree
Lingers, finish her dream
Is she dead or alive
Soon she comes for her food
Breakfast Ala Água
Why does Betsy live here
It's her home and her tree
Over "there" with Kellie
There's allergy to fish
And her little secret
It's between her and me
And her little secret
It's between her and me
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- Photos [click on one to make it larger] and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2018, All Rights Reserved
- I'm linked with Vivian Zems in the Imaginary Garden at http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2018/10/the-tuesday-platform_16.html
- When I write in First Person hardly any of my poems are entirely true, generally they have some embellishment of facts all the way to being entirely fiction. This one however, is entirely true except for our granddaughter's name. On my blogs she is generally KP.
- Betsy is in a small aquarium which I just cleaned yesterday, that is done once a week or more often. The little people are antique Fisher Price "little people" that came with a toy. Across the pond is another fellow from a MacDonald's Happy Meal, an orange haired fellow driving a ride his water vehicle of sorts. Betsy spends time visiting with them but now she spends more time in her tree than visiting.
- How to Play with Your Betta, a Betta Blogger post.
- How to Play with Your Betta, a Betta Blogger post.
Labels: Animals, Fish, KP, Poem, Syllabic Form, Toys, Tuesday Platform
9 Comments:
how delightfully odd - the fish in a tree! but I love it! fish are fascinating for what they do and don't .... and well, what a lovely little gift to you from your granddaughter :)
Ah, this is peculiar in an endearing way — that fish indeed has a mind of its own. I love how you tell this tale — I got a bit of a Roald Dahl feel in it. :-)
I'm Betta your granddaughter loves you very much. Sorry, I couldn't resist, this is really a pleasure.
A delight to read Jim. Truly enjoyed this fish tale!
This is wonderful... and at the same time a little sad (from the fish's perspective)
A lovely tale Jim..lol!..fish in a tree . A lovely gift, indeed!
It is not a fishy tale surely but a delightful fish tale more so a special gift from a special grandee. Love it Dr Jim!
Hank
What a sweet little poem. Betsy is lucky to have her own tree!
Teresa
I love the idea that a fish lives in a tree. Your grand daughter must be delighted with that whole idea😊. Love it!!
Pat R
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