Tuesday, May 19, 2015

a senryu set for Tuesday Platform

Saving Tears 

Have no tears for me 
Save them for your rainy day 
Sun comes to me first 

Not to be cried for 
I don't remember a thing 
Age has got my mind 

If I made you cry 
Surely you did nothing wrong 
Yes?  Then I forgive 

Twitter me today 
Tweet you back no matter.  Love
you still, save those tears 

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Poem copyright 2015, © jimmiehov, all rights reserved

I'm linked with Kerry at the Real Toads, Tuesday platform 
http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2015/05/the-tuesday-platform_19.html
(Posted from my iPad, in the dark)

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11 Comments:

At Tuesday, May 19, 2015 6:05:00 AM, Blogger brudberg said...

I agree.. just be happy and enjoy. Enjoyed the set.

 
At Tuesday, May 19, 2015 6:47:00 AM, Blogger Sanaa Rizvi said...

This was such a sweet poem :D loved it!

 
At Tuesday, May 19, 2015 10:24:00 AM, Blogger kaykuala said...

How so reassuring! When one gets supportive to someone dear to one's heart it tells on the close feelings. A tweet should be forthcoming certainly! Great lines Dr Jim!

Hank

 
At Tuesday, May 19, 2015 10:29:00 AM, OpenID angieinspired said...

Jim, I've been thinking about twitter and our digital age of communication too. I wonder if people with dementia even know what Twitter is?

 
At Tuesday, May 19, 2015 11:21:00 AM, Blogger Magaly Guerrero said...

Unconditional forgiveness! What a wonderful, reassuring and freeing thought, Jim.

 
At Tuesday, May 19, 2015 11:48:00 AM, Blogger Susan said...

Bad memory is a sure excuse not to ask for forgiveness. At least giving it is half the battle! Love.

 
At Tuesday, May 19, 2015 11:49:00 AM, Blogger Kerry O'Connor said...

The second stanza is one I can relate to!

 
At Tuesday, May 19, 2015 11:04:00 PM, Blogger De said...

Ah, modern love. ;)

 
At Wednesday, May 20, 2015 1:54:00 AM, Blogger Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Nice economy of words conveying so much!

 
At Wednesday, May 20, 2015 6:56:00 AM, Blogger Gillena Cox said...

i feel the same way; indeed its about thanksgiving

much love...

 
At Wednesday, May 20, 2015 6:05:00 PM, Blogger Marian said...

Aw. Yes, love.

 

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