a senryu set for Tuesday Platform
Saving Tears
Have no tears for me
Save them for your rainy day
Sun comes to me first
Not to be cried for
I don't remember a thing
Age has got my mind
If I made you cry
Surely you did nothing wrong
Yes? Then I forgive
Twitter me today
Tweet you back no matter. Love
you still, save those tears
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Poem copyright 2015, © jimmiehov, all rights reserved
I'm linked with Kerry at the Real Toads, Tuesday platform
http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2015/05/the-tuesday-platform_19.html
(Posted from my iPad, in the dark)
Labels: Poem, Senryū, Tuesday Platform
posted by Jim @ 5/19/2015 05:41:00 AM
11 comments
11 Comments:
I agree.. just be happy and enjoy. Enjoyed the set.
This was such a sweet poem :D loved it!
How so reassuring! When one gets supportive to someone dear to one's heart it tells on the close feelings. A tweet should be forthcoming certainly! Great lines Dr Jim!
Hank
Jim, I've been thinking about twitter and our digital age of communication too. I wonder if people with dementia even know what Twitter is?
Unconditional forgiveness! What a wonderful, reassuring and freeing thought, Jim.
Bad memory is a sure excuse not to ask for forgiveness. At least giving it is half the battle! Love.
The second stanza is one I can relate to!
Ah, modern love. ;)
Nice economy of words conveying so much!
i feel the same way; indeed its about thanksgiving
much love...
Aw. Yes, love.
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