Thursday, April 30, 2015

Dan Man's Gone ― Day 30 of NaPoWriMo 2015

 
Dan the man, the Destructible Dan Man
Came aboard the Mars 2-15 Express
It was a one way ticket, no return
No return ever, meaning not ever
 
Only UP this ride would go, goodbye all
Okay with Dan, he hated this world
Hated everyone, hated his family
Father and mother, wife and children, all
 
Full of hatred he, had a plan for all
On his way to Mars, there's no return, safe
Destructible Dan Man, he killed them all
He threw their bodies in the backyard well
 
5, 4, 3, 2, Lift off, we've had lift off 
The Mars 2-15 has cleared the launch pad
No remorse, safe now, "Dan Man out of here"
 
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Photo and Poem copyright © 2015 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved
 
Day 30, Phew!!  I made each one.  Fun but not an easy task.
Notes:
1.  This poem was inspired by

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13 Comments:

At Thursday, April 30, 2015 5:48:00 PM, Blogger Sanaa Rizvi said...

This is deeply horrifying..! But I loved the easy flow of the lines.. beautifully smooth :D
Congratulations on making it through this month..!
xoxo

 
At Thursday, April 30, 2015 6:01:00 PM, Blogger Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Ooh, a dark ending! But kinda fun too.

 
At Thursday, April 30, 2015 7:50:00 PM, Blogger Isadora Gruye said...

I love that this reads like a Johnny Cash song, had Johnny Cash been a martian folk hero. What a clever twist to the prompt. Thanks for posting and viva la!!!!!

 
At Thursday, April 30, 2015 9:37:00 PM, Blogger Outlawyer said...

Yikes. Glad he's gone! Congratulations, Jim, on making it through the month with al those poems! Thanks too for taking the time to comment! Take care, k.

 
At Thursday, April 30, 2015 10:19:00 PM, Blogger Helen said...

Now, that's some exit!!

 
At Friday, May 01, 2015 1:59:00 AM, Blogger Björn Rudberg said...

Indeed.. But on his way to Mars it's still a prison..

 
At Friday, May 01, 2015 4:13:00 AM, Blogger Debi Swim said...

Crazy Dan... 'I vant to be alone' got his wish.

 
At Friday, May 01, 2015 7:59:00 AM, Blogger Other Mary said...

I wonder about people who are so anxious to take a one way ride to Mars. I've always figured they haven't thought it through, but your dark alternative is certainly a possibility. I know I missed a few days, but kudos on making through the April 30/30, Jim.

 
At Friday, May 01, 2015 8:00:00 AM, Blogger Ella said...

Congrats, Jim on making it to the finish line! Darkness descends and madness still lingers~ Damn, Dan the Man.

 
At Friday, May 01, 2015 8:00:00 AM, Blogger grapeling said...

Jim, you reprobate :) ~

 
At Friday, May 01, 2015 11:06:00 AM, Blogger Sherry Blue Sky said...

Well, and we wont miss Dan much, will we? smiles.

 
At Friday, May 01, 2015 10:23:00 PM, Blogger Susie Clevenger said...

Oh no...goodbye and good riddance Dan! Great end to the month. Thanks for the poetry you brought to April.

 
At Saturday, May 02, 2015 6:58:00 AM, Blogger Marian said...

Yowza! I love that the means of transport is rather steampunk. :)
I recently read the novel The Martian. That guy didn't kill anyone, but he did end up alone. Really good, recommended if you haven't already read it.

 

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