Another "Love Poem" ― Day 22 of NaPoWriMo 2015
In Love
I love you for your being sweet
Sweeter than frosting on a cake
You are so nice to me, my love
Much nicer than my puppy dog
If only I could see you more
Caress you more, my supper soft
Time isn't long enough for us
Kiss me again, you precious dear
Will we ever stop meeting thus
Stay with me, I'll love you always
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Photo and Poem copyright © 2015 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved
I am linked with Kenia Cris at the Real Toads, The perfect love poem
and NaPoWriMo 2015, both for Day 22 of National Poem Writing Month
Notes"
- Kenia requested that we "write the perfect love poem. You can choose to use Julia Bird's formula [x (p + b + c + o)], check it here, or not, maybe you can't write form poetry (I can't), maybe whatever it is you choose to say, you need it to be long, maybe you know the secret for the completely happy relationship and would like to share it, no mystery involved. If that's the case, I'll be thankful!"
- I tried, Kenia. I haven't written many of these.
Labels: Love Poem, NaPoWriMo 2015, Poem, Real Toads, Syllabic Form
6 Comments:
Delicious! Sorry, couldn't resist — but it IS sweet: a sweet poem for a sweet love.
its the formula all right; you did it, the perfect love poem
nice, nice, nice!
much love...
Ohhh, the delectable soft-serve. May you never part ways.
sweet ~
Sweet, I scream ; )
The imagery is delicious for this particular masterpiece :)
Loved it..! Enjoy the weekend! :D
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