Sunday, May 03, 2015

Little Mouse, did you -- 55 Flash Plus


 
Little Mouse;
did you?
 
Little Mouse, did you do
your good deed for today? 
Did you make some playful
child happy and full today?
 
Little mouse, you can make
soured milk taste so good
Keep your finger out of
the drink, just smile to her
 
Just don't you forget that
you are her favorite cup
 
- - -
 
Photo and Poem copyright © 2015 Jimmiehov, All Rights Reserved


I'm linked with Kerry O'Connor at Real Toads, "FLASH 55 PLUS!" (means exactly 55 words)
Notes:
Flash 55 means to write a poem with exactly 55 words.  Including the title, I did that.
Plus was to add a little Zen.  After a hard 30 days in April, writing every day, I felt   
 that skipping a day (yesterday) and hitting the 55 target was enough.  Some might add a
 touch of Zen.  Not me. 
 

Labels: , , , ,

10 Comments:

At Sunday, May 03, 2015 12:59:00 AM, Blogger Björn Rudberg said...

Love that thought, a cup to make the child happy, ;-) it made me smile

 
At Sunday, May 03, 2015 6:26:00 AM, Blogger Kerry O'Connor said...

That could easily be my favourite cup too! Delightful.

 
At Sunday, May 03, 2015 7:11:00 AM, Blogger Sanaa Rizvi said...

Agreed with Kerry, this is delightful :D
xoxo

 
At Sunday, May 03, 2015 7:13:00 AM, Blogger Rosemary Nissen-Wade said...

Oh how cute and how joyous! (I want one!)

Btw I did see your comment on my effort, but decided to disable the Google+ comments after all (I dislike Google+) so it has disappeared. Just wanted you to know it was seen.

 
At Sunday, May 03, 2015 7:15:00 AM, Blogger Outlawyer said...

Ah. Very charming cup and cute little poem. k.

 
At Sunday, May 03, 2015 11:42:00 AM, Blogger De said...

Love the simplicity of this. :)

 
At Sunday, May 03, 2015 1:56:00 PM, Blogger Susie Clevenger said...

This is so cute. Love that cup!

 
At Monday, May 04, 2015 10:15:00 AM, Blogger Hannah said...

That looks a little like a fox to me...any way sweet poem personification. :)

 
At Monday, May 04, 2015 5:15:00 PM, Blogger Gillena Cox said...

this is so sweet

much love...

 
At Tuesday, May 05, 2015 9:31:00 AM, Blogger R.K. Garon said...

cute... and could be my cup :-)
ZQ

 

Post a Comment

<< Home