Four (big) Words -- a 'poem' for "Get Listed for May, 2015"
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Labels: Humor(?), Life, Personal-Challenge-2015, Poem, Real Toads, Syllabic Form
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Labels: Humor(?), Life, Personal-Challenge-2015, Poem, Real Toads, Syllabic Form
12 Comments:
Jim.. this sounds like the horrors that can exist inside a gated community.. the slight variations really pulls a great narrative.. though I would always question the price of such safety.
the sarcasm comes across sharply, nice write terse and no mincing of wotds, direct and sharp
much love...
Yikes--I don't know--your poem is certainly effective, but I honestly can't imagine shooting someone, if robbery were the interest--I hate to think of other things--(and hope I never have to be faced with these situations!) k.
Oh my lord... these are some horrific images that you have painted here.. nevertheless its superb..! :D
xoxo
I think there is much truth here.
Well done.
Sadly this is reality or it seems to be as we are fed a diet of fear. This is one of the most powerful pieces you have written..(just my opinion) :)
Oh, my. Powerful piece.
O, thank you for the 'suburb is safe' ~ interesting play with words...
You have captured what we see on the evening news every night, Jim! Yikes.
Dangerous, those suburbs! A scary, powerful poem. Plus interesting pictures
Sounds like the evening news!
Texas. go figure, Jim - some good photos, and an ironic reminder of the apparent tranquility that can be disrupted without warning. thanks for adding your voice ~
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