One Single Impression: Dreams
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Building Dreams
Planners building a dream
a dream to ease ones sleep
dreamer's model for dreams
dreams for you and for me
Lover's dash of romance
mystery for those inclined
travels lure edge of world
luxury bathed in gold
Pillow sprinkled with dust
dreamer's magic potent
close your eyes get some sleep
pleasant dreams coming soon
All clothed in silliness
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Prompt word, Dreams, suggested by Isabel
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Labels: Poem, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 8/07/2011 12:03:00 PM
14 comments
14 Comments:
Dreams are so fragile, so tentative. Your poem is beautiful.
Excellently done - and I loved that last line.
Dreams are often silly. I will often tell my dreams to change if they go in the wrong direction. I don't like to be frightened.
sweet and beautiful!
Yes, silly they are but a Shrink will see lots of meaning in them!
A good piece.
I like the last stanza the best!! Its bedtime here and I am awaiting those pleasant dreams.Hoping the pixie dust works for me!! :)
Oh beautiful! I want to go right to sleep and dream.
HOpe you are doing well after your TKR and thanks for the good wishes. Good to be back.
That last line and photo are utterly precious!
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/08/08/new-reality/
I enjoy silly dreams. Your picture is delightful.
A beautiful poem and what a cutie!!!
What a cute picture- and your poem is great! I especially love the last stanza- my favorite kind of dream lately! Have a great week, Jim!
the sandman has nothing over you bubba... a smiling granddaughter??!!
'All clothed in silliness'
Still eyes closed for 'pleasant dreams coming soon' :)
Excellent poem!
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