Sunday, August 07, 2011

One Single Impression: Dreams

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Building Dreams

Planners building a dream
a dream to ease ones sleep
dreamer's model for dreams
dreams for you and for me

Lover's dash of romance
mystery for those inclined
travels lure edge of world
luxury bathed in gold

Pillow sprinkled with dust
dreamer's magic potent
close your eyes get some sleep
pleasant dreams coming soon

All clothed in silliness

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© 2011 Jimmiehov
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Prompt word, Dreams, suggested by Isabel
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13 Comments:

At Sunday, August 07, 2011 12:10:00 AM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

Dreams are so fragile, so tentative. Your poem is beautiful.

 
At Sunday, August 07, 2011 3:49:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

Excellently done - and I loved that last line.

 
At Sunday, August 07, 2011 6:11:00 AM, Blogger Lisa at Greenbow said...

Dreams are often silly. I will often tell my dreams to change if they go in the wrong direction. I don't like to be frightened.

 
At Sunday, August 07, 2011 11:08:00 AM, Blogger sandra said...

sweet and beautiful!

 
At Sunday, August 07, 2011 11:12:00 AM, Blogger Harshad mehta said...

Yes, silly they are but a Shrink will see lots of meaning in them!

A good piece.

 
At Sunday, August 07, 2011 11:25:00 AM, Blogger Nanka said...

I like the last stanza the best!! Its bedtime here and I am awaiting those pleasant dreams.Hoping the pixie dust works for me!! :)

 
At Sunday, August 07, 2011 8:49:00 PM, OpenID teric said...

Oh beautiful! I want to go right to sleep and dream.

HOpe you are doing well after your TKR and thanks for the good wishes. Good to be back.

 
At Monday, August 08, 2011 6:29:00 PM, Blogger Kim Nelson said...

That last line and photo are utterly precious!

http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/08/08/new-reality/

 
At Tuesday, August 09, 2011 10:56:00 AM, Blogger vivinfrance said...

I enjoy silly dreams. Your picture is delightful.

 
At Tuesday, August 09, 2011 10:57:00 AM, Blogger Geraldine said...

A beautiful poem and what a cutie!!!

 
At Wednesday, August 10, 2011 8:37:00 AM, Blogger Me said...

What a cute picture- and your poem is great! I especially love the last stanza- my favorite kind of dream lately! Have a great week, Jim!

 
At Wednesday, August 10, 2011 2:33:00 PM, Anonymous miss pie said...

the sandman has nothing over you bubba... a smiling granddaughter??!!

 
At Thursday, August 11, 2011 1:20:00 PM, Blogger PremI said...

'All clothed in silliness'
Still eyes closed for 'pleasant dreams coming soon' :)

 

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