One Single Impression: Wind
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Wind
Blowing wind gently brush my hair
I love feeling your warm air rush
Misty morning I feel your kiss
Wet slobbers of love on my face
Gentle breeze noontime in the shade
Hugs with my drinks afternoon puffs
Evening cool your slaps leave me cold
I long no more for your embrace
Loath your ilk fresh and warm no more
Fickle wind it's over, goodbye
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Wind
Blowing wind gently brush my hair
I love feeling your warm air rush
Misty morning I feel your kiss
Wet slobbers of love on my face
Gentle breeze noontime in the shade
Hugs with my drinks afternoon puffs
Evening cool your slaps leave me cold
I long no more for your embrace
Loath your ilk fresh and warm no more
Fickle wind it's over, goodbye
Photo and Poem Copyright
© 2011 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved
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Prompt word, Wind, suggested by Dani at haiku love songs
Find more poems at One Single Impression using "Wind" as prompt
Find more poems at One Single Impression using "Wind" as prompt
Labels: One-Single-Impression, Poem, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 6/19/2011 12:03:00 AM
15 comments
15 Comments:
What a journey with the wind.. Wow!!! Thanks Jim..
You made the wind your human companion. Love the visual words.
I couldn't decide myself, whether it was a 'one night stand' or a 'whirlwind affair.' Perhaps I should have stretched it out.
Also 'the wind' could be an allegory for ...
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Jim, I was looking forward to a romantic ending. It turned out to be an anticlimax!
You sure have ways to surprise your readers.
Hmmm..whirlwind affair...is it suggestive of the word?
As I was reading your take, I was thinking you also have written in the way I have written mine!
But it is very nice, allegory of what!
enjoying the wind...so nice!!
A journey with the wind, I agree with Ramesh, nice work Jim!
Jim my friend what a wonderful Haiku. You paint a lovely picture. So calm and real. Love it!
Melanie
This was wonderful! I loved your visual imagery...you are very lucky to live near such a beautiful pond.
An affair with the wind...nice one!
Thanks for sharing.
I love the transition - a delightful read!
So it goes with that fickle wind! You just never know from one moment to the next. I sure did like that.
The path taken and the ending are quite surprising.
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I love the humor again in your poetry Jim. So refreshing. When you said slobbery kisses, I was thinking of a dog. Loving the wind cannot last long I suppose. Nicely written!
As usual- your wit came through loud and clear- love the "wet slobbers"....such imagery and implied symbolism! Have a great week~
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