Sunday, May 08, 2011

One Single Impression: Love (# 2)

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Love
love makes the world go round it's said
a lot depends upon one's age
now looking on remembering
we've been there each delightful stage

two of our best just barely three
holding hands walking down the street
forbidden kiss it's puppy love
pita-pat heart's love at first beat

thrashing about hands uncontrolled
sensuous lips wander tarry
passionate teen kiss who will know
parents silent anxious caring

stars wild and crazy gone rampant
yet serious couples families start
Sunday sleep in—church—park—or play
new adults crowd of loving hearts

you make coffee I'll do the bed
read the paper and go to work
their love has now become routine
they still bite with a little smirk

I love you dear said tenderly
oft and smiling still when they greet
they've been married a hundred years
holding hands walking down the street



puppy love—mad passionate love
wild and crazy love—earnest love
routine love—old dog (mature) love
really hope it stays that way—love

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Links: Jim's Poem, Love (# 1) All recent posts of Jim's poem using the word, "Love"

Prompt word, Love, suggested by Harshad Mehta at Space Within
More poems at One Single Impression using "Love" as prompt

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14 Comments:

At Sunday, May 08, 2011 8:30:00 PM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

I enjoyed following the stages of love and its expression in the smallest, simplest of things. To share in these ways is to know profound joy. Thanks, Jim.

 
At Sunday, May 08, 2011 10:19:00 PM, Blogger Harshad mehta said...

I love the way you have named love at different stages of life. Enjoyed this poem. Thanks Jim.

 
At Monday, May 09, 2011 1:47:00 AM, Blogger PremI said...

Every stage of love is very cute...
And the last one especially,hats off.
Amazing Jim.

 
At Monday, May 09, 2011 3:12:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

Those stages perfectly expressed.

 
At Monday, May 09, 2011 5:09:00 AM, Blogger Geraldine said...

The many sides of love, a complex word and state of mind. Nice one Jim!

 
At Monday, May 09, 2011 7:29:00 AM, Blogger sandra said...

I smile as I read this...so nice Jim!

 
At Monday, May 09, 2011 10:22:00 AM, Anonymous Jingle said...

this piece is super profound.
smiles.

thanks for visiitng me.
welcome join jingle poetry potluck today.

 
At Monday, May 09, 2011 5:50:00 PM, Blogger Isabel said...

love the descripyions of all the stages of love. great poem

 
At Monday, May 09, 2011 7:57:00 PM, Blogger The Write Girl said...

Hi Jim...you've embodied all the different stages of love. So winning and beautiful. I like the images as well. Too sweet!!

 
At Monday, May 09, 2011 9:21:00 PM, Blogger Andy said...

Excellent expression of the stages of love.

Nicely penned, Jim. Thanks for sharing.

 
At Monday, May 09, 2011 10:09:00 PM, Blogger Lisa said...

Love your post. And thanks for stopping by my blog and leaving me a poem there.

You rock.

Lisa

 
At Tuesday, May 10, 2011 10:02:00 AM, OpenID teric said...

Love the way you expressed each stage and yet in the end, is it really the same as the first. I hope not since love needs to grow and change just like life does.

 
At Tuesday, May 10, 2011 12:44:00 PM, OpenID ladynimue said...

so sweet .. like reading of a life time of love :)

 
At Friday, May 13, 2011 12:16:00 PM, Blogger Magical Mystical Teacher said...

True love lasts. I remember interviewing a couple in New Mexico a few years ago. At that time, they had been married 63 years. How did I find them? I saw them walking into the senior center hand in hand, and I was brash enough to ask them if they'd talk to me. They did. It was a great story!

 

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