Thursday, March 24, 2011

One Single Impression: Hollow

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Hollow

There was an old man his leg was hollow
where ever he'd go the cats would follow
he led them up the street and down the street
great thirst had by all and nothing to eat
alone now bottle gone cats left the rink
wasn't him they'd sought rather was his drink

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© 2011 Jimmiehov
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Prompt word, Sarcastic, suggested by Vinay (Leo) at I Rhyme Without Reason
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One Single Impression using "Hollow" as prompt

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16 Comments:

At Saturday, March 26, 2011 11:49:00 PM, OpenID teric said...

Too funny Jim!!! Love your sense of humor.

 
At Sunday, March 27, 2011 12:00:00 AM, Anonymous The Dark Lord said...

Long time, its great to be back reading your posts on OSI.
Have always loved the way you rhyme, like I once said, you might be P. G. Wodehouse reincarnate!

 
At Sunday, March 27, 2011 12:23:00 AM, Anonymous The Dark Lord said...

Methinks, the edition improves upon the original!

 
At Sunday, March 27, 2011 2:00:00 AM, Blogger Ramesh Sood said...

I enjoyed the twist.. very nice..

 
At Sunday, March 27, 2011 3:29:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

Nice one. Funny but also a little sad.

 
At Sunday, March 27, 2011 10:51:00 AM, Blogger Reflections said...

Love this... you have tied in both prompts very well, leaving the pangs of sarcasm to till the hollow void.

 
At Sunday, March 27, 2011 12:19:00 PM, Blogger Harshad mehta said...

Humorous and sad both. Liked it.

 
At Sunday, March 27, 2011 2:55:00 PM, Blogger Lisa said...

You have to worry about those cats when they drink. Love this.

 
At Sunday, March 27, 2011 8:11:00 PM, Blogger Amanda Moore said...

Jim I love the tempo this piece has but coupled with the picture it has an new meaning altogether very poignant.

 
At Monday, March 28, 2011 10:32:00 PM, Blogger The Write Girl said...

I love the humor in this although I also feel for the old man. Poor thing! This poem follows iambic pentameter. Very nice. I always like my visit here :)

 
At Tuesday, March 29, 2011 7:53:00 AM, Blogger Patti said...

Cute rhyme Jim!!! The picture made me think the poem might go in a different direction. Have a great week and as always, thanks for the comments!

 
At Tuesday, March 29, 2011 1:24:00 PM, Anonymous Jingle said...

beautiful take,
bless the man.

 
At Tuesday, March 29, 2011 5:25:00 PM, Blogger Kim Nelson said...

this just cracked me up!
here's mine:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/29/indiscretion-now-obsession/

 
At Wednesday, March 30, 2011 7:08:00 PM, Blogger sandra said...

interesting story Jim!

 
At Wednesday, March 30, 2011 8:04:00 PM, Anonymous ms pie said...

oh that's so very good jim... nice little ditty... naughty little kitties...

 
At Thursday, April 07, 2011 7:31:00 PM, Anonymous quilly said...

Sad. I hope those drunken cats sober up and the man seeks help!

 

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