One Single Impression: Sarcastic (an Acrostic)
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SARCASTIC
She at golf was not so very good
Able father helped as best he could
Right hand placed bottom first on your club
Club behind the ball just off the ground
Address ball with feet in line with pin
Swing up hips sway back sway hips swing down
Take practice swing move back keep your line
I'll keep eyes on ball—your swing was fine
Can't find my ball—O Dad that was good
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Prompt word, Sarcastic, suggested by Priyanka Bhowmick at Lens and Verses
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Labels: Acrostic, One-Single-Impression, Poem, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 3/20/2011 12:03:00 AM
15 comments
15 Comments:
Gee, I think you talking to my husband, sounds like something he would say/do. Very creatively done Jim and I bet I know what you were doing today.
Well, what do I say.. you are indeed a very creative soul..Golf? What a game that is..
O That was good!
I love acrostics and yours was very clever.
Now, I've seen people play like that :-)
Nice one.
I enjoyed this...!!
Been there! I'm chuckling!
Jim this was so much fun to read! I almost did an acrostic for this prompt glad I did not I would never have kept up with you!LOL
creative and apt one..
Happy Monday.
I am always intrigued by acrostics. This is no exception. Play ball!
Here's mine:
http://www.kimnelsonwrites.com/2011/03/21/the-proper-behavior-of-love/
So full of humor and very true to life. Not everyone can be a golf pro. This is really fun Jim :)
A light and humorous take on the prompt. I like how the rhyming structure frames the lesson.
I think I'd be shaking to even hold it properly Jim :D golf pro not in my resume, won't be too ;)
Here's My OSI
That was a lot of fun, Jim. Thanks for sharing with OSI this week.
love acrostic... you did a fine job... i like driving the cart more than anything else...
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