Sunday, March 20, 2011

One Single Impression: Sarcastic (an Acrostic)




She at golf was not so very good
Able father helped as best he could

Right hand placed bottom first on your club
Club behind the ball just off the ground
Address ball with feet in line with pin
Swing up hips sway back sway hips swing down
Take practice swing move back keep your line
I'll keep eyes on ball—your swing was fine

Can't find my ball—O Dad that was good

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Prompt word, Sarcastic, suggested by Priyanka Bhowmick at Lens and Verses
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At Sunday, March 20, 2011 12:04:00 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Gee, I think you talking to my husband, sounds like something he would say/do. Very creatively done Jim and I bet I know what you were doing today.

At Sunday, March 20, 2011 12:12:00 AM, Blogger Ramesh Sood said...

Well, what do I say.. you are indeed a very creative soul..Golf? What a game that is..

At Sunday, March 20, 2011 12:39:00 AM, Blogger Harshad mehta said...

O That was good!

At Sunday, March 20, 2011 12:54:00 AM, Blogger Rinkly Rimes said...

I love acrostics and yours was very clever.

At Sunday, March 20, 2011 3:54:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

Now, I've seen people play like that :-)
Nice one.

At Sunday, March 20, 2011 6:55:00 AM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

I enjoyed this...!!

At Sunday, March 20, 2011 7:58:00 AM, Blogger Linda Jacobs said...

Been there! I'm chuckling!

At Sunday, March 20, 2011 6:20:00 PM, Blogger Amanda Moore said...

Jim this was so much fun to read! I almost did an acrostic for this prompt glad I did not I would never have kept up with you!LOL

At Monday, March 21, 2011 1:04:00 PM, Anonymous Jingle said...

creative and apt one..
Happy Monday.

At Monday, March 21, 2011 4:28:00 PM, Blogger Kim Nelson said...

I am always intrigued by acrostics. This is no exception. Play ball!
Here's mine:

At Monday, March 21, 2011 9:30:00 PM, Blogger The Write Girl said...

So full of humor and very true to life. Not everyone can be a golf pro. This is really fun Jim :)

At Tuesday, March 22, 2011 8:01:00 PM, Blogger gabrielle said...

A light and humorous take on the prompt. I like how the rhyming structure frames the lesson.

At Wednesday, March 23, 2011 12:59:00 PM, Blogger Vinay said...

I think I'd be shaking to even hold it properly Jim :D golf pro not in my resume, won't be too ;)

Here's My OSI

At Wednesday, March 23, 2011 3:13:00 PM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

That was a lot of fun, Jim. Thanks for sharing with OSI this week.

At Friday, March 25, 2011 10:52:00 PM, Anonymous mjs pie said...

love acrostic... you did a fine job... i like driving the cart more than anything else...


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