One Single Impression: Phantom
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The Phantom
beware the phantom
comes at midnight regular
knows your every inch
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Prompt word, Wind, suggested by Felicity at The Confessions of a Philosophy Junkie
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Phantom: Ghost, in traditional belief, a physical manifestation of the soul or spirit of a deceased person (Wikipedia)
Labels: One-Single-Impression, Poem, Senryū
posted by Jim @ 7/17/2011 12:03:00 AM
9 comments
9 Comments:
Hi, Jim. :)
Wonderful senryu. Made my skin crawl.
That's a huge amount of time between midnight and 8. Does the phantom need to give himself a lot of leeway to do his mischief?:-)
Whoa, Jim! This one gave me the creeps. You mad a big impression with very few words. I like that... no waste.
Indeed. Yet we must take the test!
Must be true for many of us.. Loved it Jim..
Who is scared? Let me pass test first.
Nice one.
It's always at the bewitching hour... :) I liked this one! Creepy...
i found this so subtle and oh so comical... and the picture makes it all the more real....
I was visiting the mid week posts and thinking of you
hope all is well
Hope sends hugs
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