Sunday, July 17, 2011

One Single Impression: Phantom

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The Phantom

beware the phantom
comes at midnight regular
knows your every inch


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Prompt word, Wind, suggested by Felicity at The Confessions of a Philosophy Junkie
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One Single Impression using "Phantom" as prompt

Phantom: Ghost, in traditional belief, a physical manifestation of the soul or spirit of a deceased person (Wikipedia)

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9 Comments:

At Sunday, July 17, 2011 8:21:00 AM, OpenID poeformology said...

Hi, Jim. :)

Wonderful senryu. Made my skin crawl.

 
At Sunday, July 17, 2011 9:18:00 AM, Blogger Magical Mystical Teacher said...

That's a huge amount of time between midnight and 8. Does the phantom need to give himself a lot of leeway to do his mischief?:-)

 
At Sunday, July 17, 2011 8:19:00 PM, Blogger Kim Nelson said...

Whoa, Jim! This one gave me the creeps. You mad a big impression with very few words. I like that... no waste.

 
At Sunday, July 17, 2011 10:10:00 PM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

Indeed. Yet we must take the test!

 
At Monday, July 18, 2011 8:20:00 AM, Blogger Ramesh Sood said...

Must be true for many of us.. Loved it Jim..

 
At Tuesday, July 19, 2011 7:18:00 AM, Blogger Harshad mehta said...

Who is scared? Let me pass test first.

Nice one.

 
At Wednesday, July 20, 2011 6:05:00 AM, Blogger Psych Babbler™ said...

It's always at the bewitching hour... :) I liked this one! Creepy...

 
At Wednesday, July 20, 2011 6:13:00 PM, Anonymous ms pie said...

i found this so subtle and oh so comical... and the picture makes it all the more real....

 
At Wednesday, July 27, 2011 7:59:00 AM, Blogger Dianne said...

I was visiting the mid week posts and thinking of you
hope all is well
Hope sends hugs

 

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