Sunday, November 08, 2009

One Single Impression: Departed





To My Love

don't cry for me now
buy me some flowers—tear then
for I'm departed




Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved


Find more poems at One Single Impression
"Departed" as prompt was
suggested by Rob at
A Small Look Inside




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20 Comments:

At Saturday, November 07, 2009 8:55:00 PM, Blogger Yellow Tulip said...

:)..loved the flower part..:).there is somethin for u:)..do collect it sir

 
At Saturday, November 07, 2009 10:30:00 PM, Blogger Leo said...

a haiku well written! :)
very nice on Sir Jim :)

 
At Sunday, November 08, 2009 2:37:00 AM, Blogger gautami tripathy said...

I too wish for that...

a winter tale

 
At Sunday, November 08, 2009 3:21:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

You've captured the spirit of the word here. Excellent.

 
At Sunday, November 08, 2009 3:26:00 AM, Blogger Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

stunning haiku!!

made my eyes wet..

 
At Sunday, November 08, 2009 4:09:00 AM, Blogger Amity Me said...

very sad one Jim,

would love to have lots of flowers when i will depart, too!!!

 
At Sunday, November 08, 2009 5:25:00 AM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

Touching, Jim. Thanks.

 
At Sunday, November 08, 2009 5:50:00 AM, Blogger Loch Rob said...

Jim,
Very nice sunset photo and use of the prompt. I actually wrote two works and could not decide which to post. My second piece is along your exacting theme, called "A Simple Good-bye". Thank you for your kind comments on my post and blog.

http://sfrobbins.blogspot.com/2009/11/simple-good-bye.html

 
At Sunday, November 08, 2009 6:26:00 AM, Blogger Nessa said...

Well done.

Sunny Sunday #5 - Paper Sol

 
At Sunday, November 08, 2009 8:10:00 AM, Blogger Sweetest in the Gale said...

What a beautiful and poignant haiku...I was very touched by this one.

 
At Sunday, November 08, 2009 10:07:00 AM, Blogger Sue said...

very elegant, Jim. Interesting factoid -- in Judaism there are no flowers at funerals. Lot's of flowers for the living and the sick, but none at funerals.

 
At Sunday, November 08, 2009 1:06:00 PM, Blogger floreta said...

this one's sad! :(

 
At Sunday, November 08, 2009 5:31:00 PM, Blogger if said...

sweet and simple...!

 
At Sunday, November 08, 2009 11:15:00 PM, Anonymous Gel said...

tender & romantic

 
At Monday, November 09, 2009 6:33:00 PM, Blogger Tumblewords: said...

Touching and thoughtful. Enjoyed reading.

 
At Tuesday, November 10, 2009 5:10:00 PM, Blogger Jukota said...

I love little poems that say a lot!

 
At Wednesday, November 11, 2009 11:59:00 AM, Blogger Patti said...

perfect poem for the prompt- And Happy Belated Birthday! Hope it was great!!!

 
At Wednesday, November 11, 2009 3:32:00 PM, Blogger Kathiesbirds said...

Jimmie Hov, very succint, but I just read your comment on another blog about your grandmother and it made me so sad! How did a chiroprator kill her? I so loved my own Nana. It is so hard to miss them sometimes but what fond memories I have. It sounds like you do too and I am so sorry for your loss!

 
At Wednesday, November 11, 2009 11:18:00 PM, Blogger Carly said...

this is so sad!! the top picture is beautiful!

 
At Friday, November 13, 2009 7:48:00 PM, OpenID swapnap said...

Flowers are always better...nice verse.

 

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