One Single Impression: Elusive
Impish Elusive Nothings
a wordless little poem
Words eluded me today
for that I will simply write
tomorrow or yesterday.
Meter here abandon care
a bit of nonsense today
without those words nothing's here.
Rhyme it surely I can do
missing words not a problem
I do this lark just for you.
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"Elusive" as prompt was
suggested by Leo of Figments of Imagination
"Elusive" as prompt was
suggested by Leo of Figments of Imagination
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Labels: Humor(?), One Single Impression, Poem, Rhyme, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 10/25/2009 12:03:00 AM
23 comments
23 Comments:
Brilliant! The way you compose, so eloquently off the hat, and with your element of humor, is simply amazing.. Quite sincerely, I wish I was thus gifted!
Oh, and I just love the name for this poem, "Impish Elusive Nothings"... :)
Well Jim, I did enjoy the words you came up with .. and one of my favorite word is "lark".
A cheeky piece today. Loved it.
Wow! This is a very wonderful poem, Dr Jim =)
It's my brother whose daughter has not met my father yet. It's a very delicate situation. I dare not probe too much into it. Thank you for your concern =)
words seemed elusive? sometimes we can't really think of the right thing, but hey Jim, you made a brilliant post on the prompt...:)
care to read my kilometric rendition of the prompt, i just posted it a few minutes back...:)
Jim,
Yo' a poet and don't know it! :) Your work has me smiling this morning. Nicely done.
For someone who had no words, you did very well!! This was clever and made me smile. :~)
Elusive words, the fun goes on with or without you! I enjoyed this, Jim.
doesn't seem as if words eluded you actually Jim, because you've come up with such a beautiful poem!! :)
Sometimes, we just have to write about what is happening (or not happeing!)at the moment. The words that come out are always a surprise and a gift.
Jim, you certainly hit the prompt right on the head and gave me smiles at the same time. Thanks:)
it put a smile on my face, the language is so simple and direct
Jim my friend, this is a good one. Sometime I am at loss for words and get stuck in being creative. Not you it would seem. Excellent
love, Cassi
elusion works to create too...:)
Clever, fine and not so very elusive! Impish, for sure.
A very carefree poem today.
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but the words jus rhymed and formed a beautiful poem:)...loved ur simple take:)..nice one jim:)
Well, I like the way you compose, simple but beautiful words.
I am so impressed
rhyming with out words with words....
quite elusive of you~
I admire the word 'cheeky' which Tony wrote, but I also deem you clever, Master Jim.
Making fun of your muse are you? I just read Patois' haiku and your fun comment there! I had to come over and see what you wrote! You both made me smile!
Glad you tackled this one Jim! Even though the words were elusive, it turned out just fine! Cute!
lots of fun, Jim!! Words eluded me so successfully that I couldn't come up with a poem until Thursday.
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