Wednesday, October 14, 2009

Acrostic: Linen Moments

Linen Moments
the newlyweds

Light
In
Newlyweds'
Eyes —
Now.

Meet
Over
Mother's
Ever loving
Newly made bed,
Twist and turn under the
Sheets.

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Notes:
Written for Acrostics Only October, 2009, prompt 4, Linen Moments

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posted by Jim @ 10/14/2009 04:11:00 PM   5 comments

5 Comments:

At Wednesday, October 14, 2009 5:32:00 PM, Blogger Nessa said...

A nice twist and turn at the end.

 
At Wednesday, October 14, 2009 6:11:00 PM, Blogger Amias (ljm and liquidplastic) said...

Jim this is a wonderful place for newly weds, also for lovers everywhere ... funny, so many problems look so much better when two ..

"Twist and turn under the
Sheets"

Very good acrostic my friend!

 
At Wednesday, October 14, 2009 8:19:00 PM, Blogger Amity said...

ha ha ha...quite, hmmm...sweet and romantic....

well written Jim...

i also have two acrostics about it...

do drop by my site...:)

 
At Thursday, October 15, 2009 5:22:00 PM, Anonymous if said...

so sweet Jim...!

 
At Friday, November 06, 2009 4:36:00 PM, Anonymous Gel said...

Dear Jim,

This is tender and touching, like a soft blanket of love, from the title to the moments you still have. I adore this acrostic's simplicity and the italicized words are perfect!

 

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