Thursday, October 15, 2009

Acrostic: Not Easily Broken

Not Easily Broken

Noose is ready
Over his head
This my stallion

Ever was wild
And so noble
Steed to be
I want him
Love him only
You will know

Bare back I
Ride for now
Our fine bucking
Killer bronco—not
Easily tamed guy
New stablemate mine

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Written for Acrostics Only October, 2009, prompt 5, Not Easily Broken Moments

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6 Comments:

At Thursday, October 15, 2009 1:34:00 AM, Blogger Amias said...

You are right, Jim, a wild stallion is not easily broken.

Back in the day, my Daddy use to think of women as wild stallions, this must be true because he had eight wives, so it seem to me he was unable to tame any of them. LOL.

A good write!

 
At Thursday, October 15, 2009 1:41:00 AM, Anonymous April Belle said...

Jim, I don't know how you do it... this acrostic stuff seems so hard, yet you manage to make it look easy. I totally got the sense of "not easily broken" both from the words and the raw imagery.

You know your stallions!

 
At Thursday, October 15, 2009 2:33:00 AM, Anonymous Gel said...

So clever. Great theme to use a stallion.

 
At Thursday, October 15, 2009 5:24:00 AM, Blogger Nessa said...

At first I thought you were hanging someone, but you fooled me.

 
At Thursday, October 15, 2009 2:37:00 PM, Blogger Missy said...

This is a fun acrostic. It captures your plight so well.

 
At Tuesday, October 20, 2009 3:59:00 AM, Blogger yamini meduri said...

nice one friend..!!

first timer here..!!!nice blog..!!

 

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