A Date Perhaps? -- a Poem for dVerse Quadrille
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| [A cabin in the woods in North Louisiana. (photo © by Jimmiehov)] |
(A note to her)
"Come visit me"
Come visit me,
I'm glad we met
Let's do again
My house or yours
Judged yesterday's
conversation
Long, revealing,
found common ground
Pardon me if
I've read you wrong
10 Pine Lake Drive
You've got my phone
Please call
to say
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- Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2023, All Rights Reserved
- I am linked with Mish for dVerse Quadrille Monday #182, prompt today "pine",
- Quadrille Monday's poetry has exactly 44 words
- To reads other's Quadrille poems, click here
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posted by Jim @ 8/21/2023 04:31:00 PM
15 comments
15 Comments:
An address was a fun way to use the word! Well done!
It sounds like they had a good conversation.
Clever poem!
I like your interesting use of the prompt! Very creative, Jim.
Such a unique use of the word. I love this.
I love what you’ve done here with the four syllables per line and the repetition of similar sounds. Good rhythm and beat. Pine Oak Drive. I’m wondering if that is a real street name.
Great use... and a wonderful name of a street.
I enjoyed your fun poem, Jim!
A very sweet poem, I hope she calls!
Very sweet and down-to-earth and believable, Jim!
Much love,
David
SkepticsKaddish.com
Bravo! Clever take on the prompt
Happy you dropped by my blog
Much💖love
Sounds so promising! Love contemplating the next visit. <3
My favorite Aunt lived on Pine Lake Drive ... love how you created this quadrille, Jim. Bravo.
I'm changing my street name to Pine Lake Drive.
Thanks, Helen
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great poem. clever use of the prompt word.
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