Kin Separated -- a Fractal Poem for dVerse
Brothers by Marriage;
a fractal poem
Brothers
I love them all
Each different many ways
All is three, that's all I've got
Brothers by marriage
There's no brothers of my own
All different, separated by blood lines
Never knew any before I knew my wife
Separated they are
Geography for visits each other
Though we see them periodically
Christmas and birthday cards we send
Separated by blood line
One is brother of my wife
He is a widower still in grief
Blood ties make her closer to him
'Bout the same as the others for me
Separated by distance
Distance and blood for other two
One is my sister's hub
A basketball coach for years
Then Principal of the High School
Doesn't appreciate Sis's and my foolishness
The other is the Mrs.'s brother
His wife also died he's grieving still
Jack of many careers UPS loader first
Then oil sampler from the ships near to us
Crashed his airplane feet first, broken bones
Out of mind for month, couldn't get into ships' holds
Now he's a piano tuner, expert too of rebuilding
A short rundown of the three far away
Tennessee for the wife's brother
Louisiana sister-in law's hub
Iowa for my sister's hubby
I could say some more
Not needed here
Brothers by Marriage
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- Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2022, All Rights Reserved
- Photo at Bottom from an earlier post attributed to Shay's Prompt, here. Some have said the fellow in the back is a woman, I say he dresses differently.
- Photo at Top from in poetics of the description and examples of Fractal Poetry at https://dversepoets.com/2022/07/19/dverse-poetics-fractals-down-the-rabbit-hole-and-up-up-and-away/ . I hope mine is one.
- Go there, above, to read that post and here for other writers' works
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Labels: dVerse prompt, Family, Poem forms, True
6 Comments:
All brothers, part of the bigger family and community.
Jim, I like how you look at kin and like the image you chose at the end to represent yours.
You totally captured the idea, both in words and via the poem's shape. Kudos!
Oh I think you did tnis amazingly! No need to copy anyone else's. I have three brothers (siblings) I could not ask for any better.
I love how you've captured the bond between brothers who aren't connected by blood. It's a wonderful poem with elements of great storytelling.
Jim, this is wonderful! A very interesting look at bonds through marriage.
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