NaPoWriMo Day 30 - Poem, End of my Line
First,
HAPPY BIRTHDAY to
WILLIE NELSON at 87
(also see my 2013 blog, click here)
_ _ _
I won't be dead
Though I won't be dead, instead
I'll hear and see you but
But I can't relate back to you
Not one word or gesture you'll get
Disease for which they've found no cure
Someone must take good care of me
Know when I'm happy or I'm sad
Know if sick or well or hungry
Compare me to useless chicken
Animal with utility
But not me, totally worthless
Thank you, Goodbye all, I love you
_ _ _
- Photo and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2008 and 2920, All Rights Reserved
- Links:
- - Kerry O'Connor in the Imaginary Garden at http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2020/04/april-2020-days-26-30.html?m=1linking to
- - Isadora Gruye in the Imaginary Garden at https://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2015/04/bang-whimper-hiss.html?m=1 on April 30, 2015
- - NaPoWriMo Day 30 at http://www.napowrimo.net/day-thirty-6/
- Isadora's words:
"You will not die, but will no longer be able to interact with the world. Whats the last thing you say?"
Labels: NaPoWriMo 2020, Poem, Real Toads, Syllabic Form
5 Comments:
Excellent last words!
Oh how sad. So many live in that horrible space. Wonderful last words❣️👍🙏
Perfect last words!
Perfect last words! Beautifully poignant.
Yes, your ending is perfect. I often wonder what sort of memory footprint I am leaving. We have two daughters who can't have children. When the four of us are together we are always reminded we are looking at a tree branch that only has four leaves.
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