NaPoWriMo Day 25 - Poem for Sunday Muse
"The Sea Within" painting by
Sea Within
What do I see in the
sea within
Little glass bowl full of toys
and one small fishie
We named her Betsy we
watch her swim
She seemed to like us
could you love a fish
It would be so easy were
your head like a pretty little
glass bowl
I sit by hours watching
when you are asleep
I wish it were always like
that glass bowl
Fishes there to tell me from
within your pretty head
Because at times I wonder
Do you love me like I love you
There's flowers in the morning
and chocolate at noon
Both telling me that
you love me so very much
Like I love you
_ _ _
- Poèm Copyright, Jimmiehov 2020, All Rights Reserved
- I'm linked for my prompt with Carrie Van Horn at Sunday Muse,
http://thesundaymuse.blogspot.com/2020/04/sunday-muse-105.html?m=1- I'm also linked with Kerry O'Connor in the Imaginary Garden at http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2020/04/april-2020-days-21-25.html?m=1
- And with NaPoWriM Day at http://www.napowrimo.net/day-twenty-five-6/
Labels: Fish, Love Poem, NaPoWriMo 2020, Poem, Sunday Muse
posted by Jim @ 4/25/2020 08:32:00 AM
11 comments
11 Comments:
The heart is a complicated landscape. Your poem is beautiful and sweet Jim! Hope all is well with you these days.
If I had a glass head, would I have a brain? Only Betsy knows ~~~~
So glad I don't have a glass head. I wouldn't want everyone to know everything that goes on in there!! A sweet, romantic poem, Jim!
So sweet, watching the loved one as they sleep. A lovely poem, Jim.
Beautiful
"What do I see in the
sea within" - nice!
Both both telling me that
you love me so very much
One need not verbalize to be reassured. Classic close Dr Jim. You captured the typical tell-tale signs that one normally look for in body language or circumstances that exhibit tenderness. That itself will lead to the feelings of wanting to be together. It naturally fosters friendship in a good relationship. Great!
Hank
Oh, I love the image you create of Betsy and watching her swim ... and I love this poem and where it led you.
Beautiful!
Clever segue from fish to thought and the conclusion was lovely.
Good one, Jim!
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