Bright and Sunny Day ~~ a Whiligig Poem
Two Bites
One bright and sunny day
Soon to become darkened
Our clumsy wasp was caught
Red molecules of blood
Sticky whirl, his demise
He did begrudge that day
Spider's web alluring
Poppy seeds sugar dripped
His shouts of no avail
Until heard by the crow
False alarm, two small bites
Food chain, gizzard pulling
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Photo and Poem Copyright © 2015 Jimmiehov. All Rights Reserved
- This poem is linked to Sunday's Whirligig: A Dozen Words for Writers (# 36)
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I'm also linked with Marian at The Tuesday Platform,
This week's Whirligig Word List (all twelve): _ _ _ _ _
I'm also linked with Marian at The Tuesday Platform,
sunny, clumsy, wasp, molecules, whirl, begrudge, spider, poppy, shouts, crow, alarm, pulling, and I used all twelve, on in each line.
Labels: Humor(?), Poem, Syllabic Form, Tuesday Platform, Whirligig poem
posted by Jim @ 12/07/2015 02:30:00 PM
9 comments
9 Comments:
So it goes: The eater becomes the eaten!
clumsy clumsy wasp, caught in a vicious circle; serious issue, yet witty
much love...
Wonderful tale. Such is the cycle of life.
Great write and thanks for visiting.
And begrudge he should. Thanks for the visit,
Elizabeth
The food chain always surprise the carnivores... and I guess it doesn't end here.
And that's the circle of life. Liked the point of view here. Good read.
Ish! Just kidding. Huge grin here.
promising words.
it is like looking at a knitted scarf,
your poem is beautiful and creative.
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