One Single Impression: Feel / Feelings
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My feelings
I do feel for you
sometimes I can not reach you
just too much clutter
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© 2013 Jimmiehov
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© 2013 Jimmiehov
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Labels: Humor(?), One-Single-Impression, Poem, Senryū
posted by Jim @ 5/05/2013 02:33:00 PM
14 comments
14 Comments:
Good one.
On more serious note, often it happens that one just cannot express his feelings. It is not easy to be that 'open'!
:) REALLY NICE ONE!!!
Great depth to this.
Wonderful!! Humor (?) ~~ yes.
With three kids in a small house, I can so relate to this!
Oh, that looks familiar! Wonderfully concise, rich with meaning.
We often are frustrated with our own schedules that it stops us from maximizing our intended relationships. How true it is Dr Jim!
Hank
Oh yes Jim, change of last line changes the meaning altogether.
Cluttered mind cannot reach out. One needs to be at peace with himself.
Jim, this intrigued me. The feelings/feelings concept - feeling about for whatever vs. feelings re: emotions.
The clutter? Ha! Reminds me of my days as a single mom. And the mental clutter? Very much the same, even now (can't blame Riley, she's 24 and on her own!). Nicely played! Amy
Wonderful, Jim. I love it!
K
Time to remove the clutter I would say !!!
Considering the curling iron and other doodads, I can understand why. Your words ring true Jim. Sometimes the clutter in life and living do get in the way of reaching out to each other. Your poem is simple but very true indeed. Well penned.
Wow! Dr Jim describes the photo so well :)
Wow. This poem is perfect and powerful. It sums up so much in one tiny little package of dynamite! Love the photo too!
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