Sunday, May 05, 2013

One Single Impression: Feel / Feelings

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My feelings
 
I do feel for you
sometimes I can not reach you
just too much clutter
 
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14 Comments:

At Sunday, May 05, 2013 8:58:00 PM, Blogger Harshad Mehta said...

Good one.
On more serious note, often it happens that one just cannot express his feelings. It is not easy to be that 'open'!

 
At Monday, May 06, 2013 12:47:00 AM, Blogger VaNdAnA ShArMa said...

:) REALLY NICE ONE!!!

 
At Monday, May 06, 2013 2:07:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

Great depth to this.

 
At Monday, May 06, 2013 11:10:00 AM, Blogger Helen said...

Wonderful!! Humor (?) ~~ yes.

 
At Monday, May 06, 2013 1:58:00 PM, Blogger Laurie Kolp said...

With three kids in a small house, I can so relate to this!

 
At Monday, May 06, 2013 5:26:00 PM, Blogger Titus said...

Oh, that looks familiar! Wonderfully concise, rich with meaning.

 
At Monday, May 06, 2013 9:33:00 PM, Blogger kaykuala said...

We often are frustrated with our own schedules that it stops us from maximizing our intended relationships. How true it is Dr Jim!

Hank

 
At Monday, May 06, 2013 9:48:00 PM, Blogger Harshad Mehta said...

Oh yes Jim, change of last line changes the meaning altogether.
Cluttered mind cannot reach out. One needs to be at peace with himself.

 
At Monday, May 06, 2013 10:04:00 PM, OpenID sharplittlepencil.com said...

Jim, this intrigued me. The feelings/feelings concept - feeling about for whatever vs. feelings re: emotions.

The clutter? Ha! Reminds me of my days as a single mom. And the mental clutter? Very much the same, even now (can't blame Riley, she's 24 and on her own!). Nicely played! Amy

 
At Tuesday, May 07, 2013 11:24:00 AM, Blogger Kay L. Davies said...

Wonderful, Jim. I love it!
K

 
At Wednesday, May 08, 2013 2:57:00 AM, Blogger Green Speck said...

Time to remove the clutter I would say !!!

 
At Thursday, May 09, 2013 12:20:00 PM, Blogger Loch Rob said...

Considering the curling iron and other doodads, I can understand why. Your words ring true Jim. Sometimes the clutter in life and living do get in the way of reaching out to each other. Your poem is simple but very true indeed. Well penned.

 
At Friday, May 10, 2013 1:49:00 AM, Blogger audrey` said...

Wow! Dr Jim describes the photo so well :)

 
At Friday, May 10, 2013 2:03:00 PM, Blogger Kathie Brown said...

Wow. This poem is perfect and powerful. It sums up so much in one tiny little package of dynamite! Love the photo too!

 

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