Tuesday, March 05, 2013

One Single Impression: Unlimited

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Never Reached

My love for you has no limits. 
Like the proverbial math pro-
blem, infinity never reached.

It's taller than the London eye,
wider than the Indian Sea,
deeper than Florida sink holes.
 
It's hotter than a fresh pancake,
sweeter than strawberry shortcake.
Would you give me please,
your sweet smile?

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© 2013 Jimmiehov
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Prompt word suggested by Ramesh Sood of  A Little More Than Ordinary
Find more poems using the "Monday" prompt word at  One Single Impression.
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posted by Jim @ 3/05/2013 11:11:00 PM   8 comments

8 Comments:

At Wednesday, March 06, 2013 8:20:00 PM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

Gorgeous poem--tender love. So nice.

 
At Wednesday, March 06, 2013 10:35:00 PM, Blogger betty-NZ said...

Aw, how sweet!

 
At Wednesday, March 06, 2013 10:54:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

this is down to earth poetry everyone can relate. it is simple and so sweet.

 
At Thursday, March 07, 2013 11:22:00 AM, Blogger Sue Seibert said...

Lovely!

 
At Thursday, March 07, 2013 7:43:00 PM, Blogger Loch Rob said...

Jim,

I liked the imagery of your poem. As I think about unlimited, I think about that smile from a very special person. Nicely done.

 
At Friday, March 08, 2013 1:18:00 PM, Blogger Amrit Sinha said...

This is lovely ... love sure is priceless :-)

 
At Saturday, March 09, 2013 11:32:00 AM, Blogger Ramesh Sood said...

I am sure you got them many times more than you thought.. unlimited..Thanks Jim for this Gem..

RS

 
At Tuesday, April 30, 2013 9:01:00 PM, Blogger Kathie Brown said...

Cute and beguiling! ;-)

 

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