Saturday Census: Got up before the sun
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Got up before the sun.
Here my ditty to run.
Five words and five lines.
"Good morning" I have said.
I'm going back to bed.
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For today's Saturday Census we are to write a story in fives. Five sentences consisted of five words EACH (25 words. Five sentences. Five words in each sentence. 5 x 5 = 25).
For more Saturday Census stuff or how to do your own, go here.
Labels: Poem, Rhyme, Saturday-Centus, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 3/10/2012 05:59:00 AM
16 comments
16 Comments:
This is creative and nice.
Nicely done.... and how many early risers have done just this?
I kind of felt like that too. This was really an easy centus, but kind of hard too at the same time...maybe just because my day is really stocked full.....
A bit like mine in reverse.
Clever and cute and my sentiments exactly !!!
I see we started the day the same way! Happy Saturday:@)
Hey, Jim. Thanks for stopping by and commenting. You asked if that was me in the picture. My answer, "Yes, that's me.... in my dreams!" It's actually a photo I found on the Internet.
haha...I could do that too!!
I love that! Fun and relaxing....
Well done! I think maybe I should have followed your example because Sunday morning feels like it has come VERY early.
=)
Hahahaha! I feel like going back to bed myself! Great take on the prompt!!
Thank God you got rid of those squiggly words! And thank you for your comment on my post!! I left you a response. I am pissed!!
oh i wish i could go back to bed ... it's a little to late for that now!
Good one. Clever. I like it a lot.
Very clever ditty!
Anna
Anna's SC challenge for wk 97 - 'FIVES'
Jim! This was a cute little five line poem.
I felt EXACTLY like that this morning...and it wasn't even a Saturday!
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