One Single Impression: Smile
Smile: the flirt
You smile—makes me warm all over
a warm I am liked kinda feel
I return your smile who wouldn't
leaves me gushing hope you won't know
.
Don't get your hopes wide awakened
it started there I smile to all
you aren't my favorite no way
now you're blushing please somewhere go
.
- - - - - -
Poem and Photo Copyright
© 2012 and 2010 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved
- - - - - -
The word, Smile, is prompted at One Single Impression
The prompt word was suggested by Geraldine of Take a Happy Break
I'm also linked with the Real Toads, Tuesday Platform Challenge for July 21, 2015, at withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2015/07/the-tuesday-platform_21.html
- - - - - -
Poem and Photo Copyright
© 2012 and 2010 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved
- - - - - -
The word, Smile, is prompted at One Single Impression
The prompt word was suggested by Geraldine of Take a Happy Break
I'm also linked with the Real Toads, Tuesday Platform Challenge for July 21, 2015, at withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2015/07/the-tuesday-platform_21.html
Labels: Flirty Guy, One-Single-Impression, Poem, Syllabic Form, Tuesday Platform
posted by Jim @ 1/22/2012 12:03:00 PM
19 comments
19 Comments:
too cute Jim! you made me smile with this post.
btw, the Ched won the contest woohooo...thanks again for helping to make that happen.
Witty. Thanks Jim for making me smile.
Enjoyed that, and a delicious ending.
heartwarming
this is darling- especially that cute little bug!
Our Chainsaw bear is going oin the moving van- he'll be well wrapped!
and I'll have to take a pic of the interior of our garage!
I had a Datsun 1970 pickup for 10 years- I loved it!
Have a great Sunday!
Thanks for the smile this Sunday Morning.
That pic is cute ~
positive...lovely!
Your poem made me smile!
This is great! The line "a warm I am liked kinda feel" reminds me of the joy of that feeling.
Ha - this is great!
The twisting, turning sentence structure here is lots of fun. Childlike in the most positive of ways.
hahaha...funny lines, cute picture. Thank you for reminding me actually about OSI when you wrote your comment on my blog piece. I've been so busy yesterday with the lunar new year and didn't think about checking OSI until I read yours, and thought, what a nice prompt. Have to take it, so I did. It's up now. Have a wonderful week, Jim. It's nice to have a community here online.
That was so cute- that and the picture totally made me smile! Hope you are smiling through your week...:)
Smile :)
adorable! I loved everything about it, and you made me smile for sure.
very cute. gracias
wink!
This is adorable :D
Chuckles! You have that particular brand of humor in this and is similar to some others before also. Great lines Dr Jim!
Hank
Post a Comment
<< Home