Sunday, October 30, 2011

One Single Impression: Sunset (an acrostic poem)

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At Sunset:
a checklist

Sun is brilliantly setting
Under the clouds growing dark
Night is not far away
Splendor over the water
Evening formally announced
Today has been secured

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Photo and Poem
Copyright ©2011 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved

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The word, Sunset is prompted at One Single Impression
Sunset was suggested by Kremo of The Obtuse Angle .
Note: The sun is not red. Click here to see the reason why.

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posted by Jim @ 10/30/2011 12:03:00 AM   20 comments

20 Comments:

At Sunday, October 30, 2011 12:17:00 AM, Blogger Nanka said...

I like the formal announcement, lovely lines!!

 
At Sunday, October 30, 2011 12:28:00 AM, Blogger Tammie Lee said...

a lovely sunset poem

 
At Sunday, October 30, 2011 12:58:00 AM, Blogger Ramesh Sood said...

That's goodone..

 
At Sunday, October 30, 2011 2:37:00 AM, Blogger Harshad Mehta said...

Yes, sometimes we are happy that day is over.

 
At Sunday, October 30, 2011 3:14:00 AM, Blogger vivinfrance said...

Nice accrostic. Is splender a US spelling of splendour?

 
At Sunday, October 30, 2011 3:41:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

An excellent acrostic.

 
At Sunday, October 30, 2011 4:49:00 AM, Blogger Lisa at Greenbow said...

Perfect photo to go with your poem. I like how the poem builds to rest.

 
At Sunday, October 30, 2011 6:31:00 AM, Anonymous shail said...

"Evening formally announced" I liked that :)
Perfect picture to go with your acrostic poem.

 
At Sunday, October 30, 2011 12:52:00 PM, Blogger Jim said...

Thank you Viv.
Dictionary.com asked me, "Did you mean splendor?" so I changed my splender spelling to be correct.
Blogger spell check did not work on this because of the changed color of the first letter, "S".

Dictionary.com's first definition for both splendor and splendour: (noun) "brilliant or gorgeous appearance, coloring, etc.; magnificence: the splendor of the palace."
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At Sunday, October 30, 2011 6:11:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

nice image!

 
At Monday, October 31, 2011 8:18:00 AM, Blogger Kremo said...

Today has indeed been secured ! vividly put !!

 
At Tuesday, November 01, 2011 1:31:00 AM, Blogger kaykuala said...

Lovely acrostic Jim.Must have been a great day. Nothing untoward happened and the day was secured! Great!

Hank

 
At Tuesday, November 01, 2011 8:58:00 PM, Blogger The Write Girl said...

Beautiful sunset acrostic. Nicely written Jim.

 
At Wednesday, November 02, 2011 1:38:00 PM, Anonymous Anonymous said...

Glad the day is secured before the sun goes down! Perfect.

 
At Wednesday, November 02, 2011 5:27:00 PM, Blogger Pratibha said...

perfect acro !! liked the scene described :)

 
At Wednesday, November 02, 2011 9:20:00 PM, Anonymous Morning said...

one day is secured after sunset,

love the line.

 
At Thursday, November 03, 2011 3:38:00 AM, Blogger aayanman said...

Wonderful - subtle and beautiful.

 
At Thursday, November 03, 2011 1:19:00 PM, Anonymous ms pie said...

hello jim.. i like the flow and serenity your poem speaks of... love the thought that as i sleep the night away today has been secured.... and oh by the way dynamite acrostic!

 
At Friday, December 02, 2011 7:09:00 AM, Blogger audrey` said...

This is a very good acrostic poem, Dr Jim :)

 
At Friday, October 19, 2012 6:32:00 PM, Blogger Audrey Howitt aka Divalounger said...

Beautifully done--especially the ending!

 

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