One Single Impression: Obsession
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Obsession
I'm carried away
my obsession has control
you cannot reach me
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©2011 Jimmiehov
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Obsession
I'm carried away
my obsession has control
you cannot reach me
Poem Copyright
©2011 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved
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Picture of our granddaughter, KP, taken by our daughter, Karen. All rights are reserved by her, Karen.
Prompt word, Obsession, suggested by Amity at Dreams Are My Reality v 2.0
Find more poems at One Single Impression using "Obsession" as prompt
Prompt word, Obsession, suggested by Amity at Dreams Are My Reality v 2.0
Find more poems at One Single Impression using "Obsession" as prompt
Labels: One-Single-Impression, Senryū
posted by Jim @ 8/21/2011 08:05:00 PM
14 comments
14 Comments:
A lot to think about here Jim. Well done with the prompt. And what a cute photo!
That is the nicest photo I've seen and it is so natural of a child that age!! The obsession is great and the trying to reach is endearing!!
I hope you feeling better Jim! what a cutie pie in this photo .
Good one, Jim! That kind of out of reach can be good, as it is in your photo, or not, which we don't have to worry about after a look at this great photo!
A sweet little obsession Jim...beautiful photo as well.
control...that is elegant...:)
lovely Jim
is that KP at the piano?
it is a beautiful photo
very classic
This is a delightful take Jim.. lovely photo..that!!
What a sweet photo~ Loved the verse- yes obsessions can turn a person into being unreachable- that's when obsessions turn dangerous, I think! Hope you are feeling more yourself these days! I went back to school this week- it gets harder and harder as I get older and older... :(
I can totally understand this poem. When I get into doing some piece of art you can't hardly get my attention. Heck I don't even get hungry. Unheard of. tee hee... Beautiful photo of your Grand. So sweet with those little legs dangling.
obsession, it can go either way....
..hi jim.. from yr response over at the pie place i wanted to come back and say AWESOME thank you for the link and those words... i am speechless...
I think this goes really deep, and you paint an image of obsession that penetrates through the deep rooted negative notions. Notions that taint mankind with being average, far removed from the rare geniuses.
Blogging after a long gap, didn't have a chance to go through your previous posts before. Hope you're okay, and I agree with one commentator, that you looked cheerful even when down with ur knee. Cheers to you!
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