One Single Impression: Wheat
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Wheat
beef tomato cheese
wheat tortilla soft taco
lettuce sour cream
yours--I'll have the same except
crispy fried corn tortilla
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Prompt word, Wheat, suggested by Niebla at NIEBLA FOG; A hermetic weblog
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Labels: One-Single-Impression, Tanka
posted by Jim @ 8/28/2011 12:00:00 AM
14 comments
14 Comments:
Ummmmmmmm... This actually got me hungry!! I admire the way you make ur verses 'live' by immersing them in some backdrop - of sounds, or smells, or scenes, or even a tale thats worth narrating. Mouthwatering food, on this occasion.
Oh, and thank you for stopping by my blog, and reading my work. Much appreciated.
"Where's the beef" cried the LOL (Little Old Lady) in the old Wendy's TV commercial.
Here there isn't any because it was a fish taco I was eating.
http://jimmiehov.blogspot.com/search?q=fish+taco (copy and paste the URL)
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Funny how wheat tends to take our mind into the kitchen.
Can I have a bite please?
Very visual.. I like it ~
yummy items, wow.
bless your Sunday.
That's a yummy verse! :)
http://wordsinverse.wordpress.com
You made me hungry for Tortillas! I'm just grinding the wheat....
My OSI Post - Millstone is here
Wow! Jim, it is sure very Appetizing.
nice!!
Jim my friend, you make me hungry. Very clever. Nice Haiku.
Melanie
A thoroughly delicious, satisfying poem, Jim.
ooh i'm hungry, now Jim! that photo adds to the senses your words evoke. (i remember that commercial!)
a salivating tanka!
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