Sunday, August 28, 2011

One Single Impression: Wheat

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Wheat

beef tomato cheese
wheat tortilla soft taco
lettuce sour cream
yours--I'll have the same except
crispy fried corn tortilla

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Prompt word, Wheat, suggested by Niebla at NIEBLA FOG; A hermetic weblog
Find more poems at
One Single Impression using "Phantom" as prompt

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14 Comments:

At Saturday, August 27, 2011 11:55:00 PM, Anonymous The Dark Lord said...

Ummmmmmmm... This actually got me hungry!! I admire the way you make ur verses 'live' by immersing them in some backdrop - of sounds, or smells, or scenes, or even a tale thats worth narrating. Mouthwatering food, on this occasion.

 
At Saturday, August 27, 2011 11:58:00 PM, Anonymous The Dark Lord said...

Oh, and thank you for stopping by my blog, and reading my work. Much appreciated.

 
At Sunday, August 28, 2011 3:44:00 AM, Anonymous Jim said...

"Where's the beef" cried the LOL (Little Old Lady) in the old Wendy's TV commercial.
Here there isn't any because it was a fish taco I was eating.
http://jimmiehov.blogspot.com/search?q=fish+taco (copy and paste the URL)
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At Sunday, August 28, 2011 5:58:00 AM, Blogger Lisa at Greenbow said...

Funny how wheat tends to take our mind into the kitchen.

 
At Sunday, August 28, 2011 7:18:00 AM, Blogger Grace said...

Can I have a bite please?

Very visual.. I like it ~

 
At Sunday, August 28, 2011 12:56:00 PM, Blogger The Cello Strings said...

yummy items, wow.

bless your Sunday.

 
At Monday, August 29, 2011 1:15:00 AM, Anonymous shail said...

That's a yummy verse! :)

http://wordsinverse.wordpress.com

 
At Monday, August 29, 2011 10:19:00 AM, Blogger Nanka said...

You made me hungry for Tortillas! I'm just grinding the wheat....

My OSI Post - Millstone is here

 
At Monday, August 29, 2011 1:26:00 PM, Anonymous Saras said...

Wow! Jim, it is sure very Appetizing.

 
At Tuesday, August 30, 2011 8:01:00 AM, Blogger sandra said...

nice!!

 
At Tuesday, August 30, 2011 3:42:00 PM, Blogger Cassiopeia Rises said...

Jim my friend, you make me hungry. Very clever. Nice Haiku.


Melanie

 
At Tuesday, August 30, 2011 4:29:00 PM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

A thoroughly delicious, satisfying poem, Jim.

 
At Thursday, September 01, 2011 9:54:00 PM, Anonymous gel said...

ooh i'm hungry, now Jim! that photo adds to the senses your words evoke. (i remember that commercial!)

 
At Thursday, September 01, 2011 10:52:00 PM, Blogger vivinfrance said...

a salivating tanka!

 

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