One Single Impression: Cognizance
She was barely awake
no alarms set for today
Yet somehow
someplace
someone's alarm had stirred her deep
It sounded in her ear
in her head
The cat was still sleeping
she wished she had a dog
The dog would have barked
making her feel
much more safe
A shadow brushed the curtain
quickly she closed the window
Rather she tried
The window did not shut
her eyes were fixed
A gruesome sight for her to see
Run run scream run
Oh for a dog right now
The cat rolled over
barely hissed
What was the trouble
no one was there for such a scare
The clothes on the line
left there from yesterday
swaying in the breeze
Of these my lady was not aware
as she grabbed a broom
out the door she ran
still screaming
for all to hear
Now she remembered to look under her pillow
There was a gun
she cocked it
aimed
Wait, wait
something's not right
Where was the broom
why was she still in bed
Shoot to kill regardless
understand tomorrow
the cat ducked under the bed
the clothes fell off the line
the window slammed shut
Fuzzy brained barely cognizant of moonlight and fear she drifted into sleep once more
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Labels: One Single Impression, Poem, prose poem
13 Comments:
This poem reminds me of the old Peggy Lee song,
"Is that all there is?"
"We were so very much in love.
Then one day he went away and I thought I'd die, but I didn't,
and when I didn't I said to myself, "is that all there is to love?"
..
Edge-of-the-seat stuff. Excellently done.
Sounds like you had a nightmare recently?
taut and visceral. a compelling read. when will she wake up?
Must have been some dream! Poor lady.
Even had me scared! Nice write, and really great ending. Surely we can all relate to this.
I would not mess with this lady. Nor would I want to be in the same room with her at bed time!
I could not stop reading fast to know what was happening...love this!
she is a wild one, both poem and lady. thanks for the ride.
Glad she settled down - nothing worse than bullet holes in the curtains. :) I loved this little piece!
Wow...full of suspense...:)
So that can be done in a poem...something like cliffhanger...?
Nice, really nice piece Jim!
I really love this one, great story and suspense.
Wow Jim!!! 'nuff said- just Wow!
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