Sunday, March 28, 2010

One Single Impression: Avatar



My Avatar

Ugly and so scrawny
smirks at me from afar,
my avatar hates me;
I hate my avatar.

What did he do to me
that gets me so upset?
The others are pretty
yet here's my ugly pet.

And now I'm asking you
what is your opinion;
for you would he do?
I'd rather an onion.

Beauty running skin deep
but no curves here to love,
angles and bony knees.
My own is far above.




Poem and Photos Copyright
© 2010 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved


Find more poems at One Single Impression
"Murmur" as prompt was suggested
by Beth Patterson at
Virtual Tea House

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18 Comments:

At Sunday, March 28, 2010 2:10:00 AM, Blogger Stan Ski said...

But so many more layers to reveal...

 
At Sunday, March 28, 2010 2:46:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

Well I like it ;-)

 
At Sunday, March 28, 2010 7:18:00 AM, OpenID fourwindshaiga said...

I think it is kind of cute. Looks like a beet with feet!

 
At Sunday, March 28, 2010 7:31:00 AM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

I like your avatar. I like your poem, too.

 
At Sunday, March 28, 2010 7:59:00 AM, Blogger Sue said...

an onion, hmmm...a man of many layers.

 
At Sunday, March 28, 2010 10:14:00 PM, Anonymous Dances With Loons said...

Content, discontent...whatever moves you, Jim. Great pic and clever poem.

 
At Monday, March 29, 2010 7:05:00 AM, Blogger Robin said...

Very clever! I really like the closing line to your poem...maybe it truly is far above.

 
At Monday, March 29, 2010 9:56:00 AM, Blogger Leo said...

very interesting Jim! :)

 
At Monday, March 29, 2010 9:56:00 AM, Blogger Beth P. said...

Dear Beet-with-Feet--

All things are beautiful. It just takes the adjustment of our eyes!

Loved this--and your wit, as usual!

 
At Monday, March 29, 2010 5:05:00 PM, Blogger Amity said...

Yes, your avatar looks scrawny and ugly...but you could have chosen a more beautiful one, like mine!

Good morning to your avatar, and am happy to note you made a beautiful poem out of your scrawny one!

 
At Monday, March 29, 2010 5:59:00 PM, Blogger Tumblewords: said...

Too funny, Jim! I envy your avatar - matter of fact, mine just turned green.

 
At Monday, March 29, 2010 6:12:00 PM, Blogger Tammie Lee said...

Your poetry and photo made me chuckle; cool avatar.

 
At Tuesday, March 30, 2010 8:01:00 PM, Blogger Patti said...

Love the avatar- it's so YOU! Your rhyme was great- you are very creative! Missed your poem last week.

 
At Wednesday, March 31, 2010 9:44:00 AM, Blogger Poetikat said...

This was fun, Jim, but it also had a little under the skin (so-to-speak). I liked the "ugly pet" line.

Kat

 
At Wednesday, March 31, 2010 11:53:00 AM, Anonymous Gel said...

Aw, I love that shade of pink and those adorable feet remind me of your adventurous walks.

 
At Wednesday, March 31, 2010 6:09:00 PM, Anonymous one more believer said...

kinship runs so deep.... a onion you say...

 
At Thursday, April 01, 2010 10:38:00 AM, Blogger gabrielle said...

I like your avatar and your unfailing wit. An onion would do as well. Peel away the layers and you get to the sweetest part.

 
At Thursday, April 01, 2010 7:21:00 PM, Blogger Loch Rob said...

Jim, glad to see you back. I haven't seen a post for awhile. I hope things are all okay? I enjoyed your poem, it made me smile a lot. I like your avatar too!

 

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