Night Rain ~ Haiku Bones
Somber Peace
her window's ajar
pitty pat escape in sleep
night rain's peace will reign
sadness comes stillborn and death
A Farewell to Arms recalled
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drops on window run
pitty pat escape in sleep
night rain's peace will reign
bright morning seems different
new day starts bringing fresh hope
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7 Comments:
Would keeping the window closed keep the sleeping in? Perhaps...
Rainless night
nice one!
Somewhat sad..
clouds roll over
pressed the wrong button :-(
Marriage of image and word. Here's mine.
sometimes we let the night in.
Now I gotta read that book again. That is okay, it was good. So are your poems.
Jim, these are lovely. Full of unspoken emotions. Well done.
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