Sunday, April 25, 2010

Night Rain ~ Haiku Bones



Somber Peace

her window's ajar
pitty pat escape in sleep
night rain's peace will reign
sadness comes stillborn and death
A Farewell to Arms recalled


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drops on window run
pitty pat escape in sleep
night rain's peace will reign
bright morning seems different
new day starts bringing fresh hope

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7 Comments:

At Sunday, April 25, 2010 5:48:00 PM, Blogger Magical Mystical Teacher said...

Would keeping the window closed keep the sleeping in? Perhaps...

Rainless night

 
At Sunday, April 25, 2010 5:52:00 PM, Blogger rdl said...

nice one!

 
At Monday, April 26, 2010 8:09:00 AM, Blogger gautami tripathy said...

Somewhat sad..

clouds roll over

 
At Monday, April 26, 2010 8:33:00 AM, Blogger John's comments said...

pressed the wrong button :-(

Marriage of image and word. Here's mine.

 
At Monday, April 26, 2010 10:46:00 AM, Blogger gabrielle said...

sometimes we let the night in.

 
At Monday, April 26, 2010 2:24:00 PM, OpenID fourwindshaiga said...

Now I gotta read that book again. That is okay, it was good. So are your poems.

 
At Tuesday, April 27, 2010 11:08:00 AM, Blogger Cassiopeia Rises said...

Jim, these are lovely. Full of unspoken emotions. Well done.

 

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