Tuesday, December 01, 2009

Acrostic: Out House


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OUT HOUSE

Outdoor privy sitting
Under the oak
Tree's shelter; peeing.

How I like
Our freedom there
Under the stars,
Sharing splashes with
Everyone around.

Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved


An earlier poem I had written and posted
for this out house,
read it here.


Written for Acrostics Only November, 2009, prompt 6, Humor Acrostic: Out House

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10 Comments:

At Tuesday, December 01, 2009 5:24:00 PM, Blogger Rebecca said...

I like the house. Are those license plates for siding?

 
At Tuesday, December 01, 2009 6:01:00 PM, Blogger Maggie said...

This looks like what may be seen at a local or state park.

Ya made me smile:)

 
At Tuesday, December 01, 2009 11:44:00 PM, Blogger Missy said...

Hilarious Stuff here!!! Loved It

 
At Wednesday, December 02, 2009 5:14:00 AM, Blogger Amias said...

This was truly funny! I remember days like this! We were the proud owner of a two seaters.

 
At Thursday, December 03, 2009 10:36:00 AM, Blogger Nessa said...

I like outhouses and I like your poem.
Name That Christmas Song

 
At Thursday, December 03, 2009 12:52:00 PM, Blogger Yellow Tulip said...

nice house :)..lovely words:)

 
At Friday, December 04, 2009 2:26:00 PM, Blogger Shraddha@theselfloveproject said...

very nice Jim!!

i very much enjoyed it..

 
At Saturday, December 05, 2009 11:16:00 AM, Blogger Leo said...

hehehe! :D

good one sir!

 
At Sunday, December 06, 2009 6:12:00 PM, Blogger The Write Girl said...

What a creative looking outhouse... and a lovely acrostic as well.

 
At Friday, December 18, 2009 9:32:00 PM, Blogger Amity Me said...

this one's a clean outhouse, seems like a refuge to you Jim...:)

 

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