One Single Impression: Romance
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The Evening Breeze
The evening breeze is blowing
with the moon brightly glowing.
Don't care where the fellows are
they're all so far—I'm with you.
We've got the juices flowing
pale moonlight, sets us glowing.
A little kiss seems so right
not out of sight thus you think.
We'll pucker up, close our eyes,
erase the moon from the skies.
Our touch and kiss then some more
right here before moon's bright light.
My want for you is growing,
the evening breeze still blowing.
Our moon, the breeze, you so fair;
ours in the air—is romance.
This moment seize just for us.
For us love may follow lust .
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Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved
The evening breeze is blowing
with the moon brightly glowing.
Don't care where the fellows are
they're all so far—I'm with you.
We've got the juices flowing
pale moonlight, sets us glowing.
A little kiss seems so right
not out of sight thus you think.
We'll pucker up, close our eyes,
erase the moon from the skies.
Our touch and kiss then some more
right here before moon's bright light.
My want for you is growing,
the evening breeze still blowing.
Our moon, the breeze, you so fair;
ours in the air—is romance.
This moment seize just for us.
For us love may follow lust .
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Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov
All Rights Reserved
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"Romance" as prompt was
suggested by Geraldine of My Poetic Path
Labels: One Single Impression, Poem, Rhyme, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 9/06/2009 12:03:00 AM
29 comments
29 Comments:
You caught thamt moment very well in here.
I hold myself in the doorway
Suspended action
The world left on its edge, still.
Murmur in the clouds.
wonderfully sweet and romantic.
Is that tongihts full moon in the photo?
Spirithelpers
Enjoyed how you referred to "our moon", suggesting an intimate romantic bonding.
Hot and heavy here Jim!!!! Ohhhlllaaaa....love the photo too.
wow wow wow! :D
what beautiful words!
and nice photo! :)
Such a romantic. Loved this.
Jim, this must have been a special day. "Love will follow lust". Your words did a great job capturing the motion too. I really liked it.
A true moon-filled romance.
Sometimes it does, Jim! I was reading in a book entitled Play (about the importance of play in our development) that this is actually the natural order of things.
I love this winsome, courtly love poem.
Beautiful poem!
Anna
This was sweet and oh so romantic...loved it!
lovely kind of romance!
Those last two lines were amazing...
ooh great! yes i do think love and lust can coexist.
Lovely....
You captured the moment well Jim, and there's nothing wrong with a little lust, it's very romantic when you are with the one you love.
Romance, a little love spat
is good for the its health.
Glow-meter will check its pulse
to see if it needs more sun.
Only way to nourish
is through the man's stomach.
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hi Jim--
your last stanza...it would appear that it has, fortunately for both of youse!
thanks--nicely turned....
i had no doubt you would cover romance well!!
Jim, I really enjoyed reading your poem. It gave me a mixture of goose bumps and a blank feeling as I was reading.
It was mellifluous and sweet.
How romantic! Such lovely and touching imagery in these lines...Nice!
Desire waxes and wanes like the moon and love endures. a beautiful passionate ode.
Oh, I'm in love. Jim this is wonderful. Lust love your images.
Excellent my friend.
love-Melanie-bhd
very romantic and sweet!!
hope you had great long weekend Jim
shraddha
i feel thatromantic breeze jim!
I liked it- such is the romance between 2 people. And I loved the picture- very appropriate with your words~
loved the rhyme. I caught a hint of a little sly fun in this.
I like this: "Our touch and kiss then some more
right here before moon's bright light."
Perfect romance captured in the words.
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