Sunday, September 06, 2009

One Single Impression: Romance

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The Evening Breeze

The evening breeze is blowing
with the moon brightly glowing.

Don't care where the fellows are
they're all so far—I'm with you.

We've got the juices flowing
pale moonlight, sets us glowing.

A little kiss seems so right
not out of sight thus you think.

We'll pucker up, close our eyes,
erase the moon from the skies.

Our touch and kiss then some more
right here before moon's bright light.

My want for you is growing,
the evening breeze still blowing.

Our moon, the breeze, you so fair;
ours in the air—is romance.

This moment seize just for us.
For us love may follow lust .

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Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov
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Find more poems at One Single Impression
"Romance" as prompt was
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29 Comments:

At Saturday, September 05, 2009 11:13:00 PM, Blogger gautami tripathy said...

You caught thamt moment very well in here.

I hold myself in the doorway

 
At Saturday, September 05, 2009 11:30:00 PM, Blogger spacedlaw said...

Suspended action
The world left on its edge, still.
Murmur in the clouds.

 
At Saturday, September 05, 2009 11:49:00 PM, Blogger Tammie Lee said...

wonderfully sweet and romantic.
Is that tongihts full moon in the photo?
Spirithelpers

 
At Saturday, September 05, 2009 11:53:00 PM, Blogger Greyscale Territory said...

Enjoyed how you referred to "our moon", suggesting an intimate romantic bonding.

 
At Sunday, September 06, 2009 12:37:00 AM, Blogger Geraldine said...

Hot and heavy here Jim!!!! Ohhhlllaaaa....love the photo too.

 
At Sunday, September 06, 2009 2:22:00 AM, Blogger Leo said...

wow wow wow! :D

what beautiful words!

and nice photo! :)

 
At Sunday, September 06, 2009 3:07:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

Such a romantic. Loved this.

 
At Sunday, September 06, 2009 6:52:00 AM, Blogger Loch Rob said...

Jim, this must have been a special day. "Love will follow lust". Your words did a great job capturing the motion too. I really liked it.

 
At Sunday, September 06, 2009 6:59:00 AM, Blogger Maggie said...

A true moon-filled romance.

 
At Sunday, September 06, 2009 7:50:00 AM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

Sometimes it does, Jim! I was reading in a book entitled Play (about the importance of play in our development) that this is actually the natural order of things.

I love this winsome, courtly love poem.

 
At Sunday, September 06, 2009 8:24:00 AM, Blogger Vita Stunder said...

Beautiful poem!
Anna

 
At Sunday, September 06, 2009 11:39:00 AM, Blogger Sweetest in the Gale said...

This was sweet and oh so romantic...loved it!

 
At Sunday, September 06, 2009 12:50:00 PM, Anonymous if said...

lovely kind of romance!

 
At Sunday, September 06, 2009 1:35:00 PM, Blogger bethany said...

Those last two lines were amazing...

 
At Monday, September 07, 2009 12:43:00 AM, Blogger floreta said...

ooh great! yes i do think love and lust can coexist.

 
At Monday, September 07, 2009 1:38:00 AM, Blogger Jeeves said...

Lovely....

 
At Monday, September 07, 2009 1:43:00 AM, Blogger Amias said...

You captured the moment well Jim, and there's nothing wrong with a little lust, it's very romantic when you are with the one you love.

 
At Monday, September 07, 2009 8:39:00 AM, Blogger Jim said...

Romance, a little love spat
is good for the its health.

Glow-meter will check its pulse
to see if it needs more sun.

Only way to nourish
is through the man's stomach.
..

 
At Monday, September 07, 2009 8:45:00 AM, Blogger Beth P. said...

hi Jim--
your last stanza...it would appear that it has, fortunately for both of youse!

thanks--nicely turned....

 
At Monday, September 07, 2009 9:32:00 AM, Blogger qualcosa di bello said...

i had no doubt you would cover romance well!!

 
At Monday, September 07, 2009 3:18:00 PM, Blogger Kuyerjudd said...

Jim, I really enjoyed reading your poem. It gave me a mixture of goose bumps and a blank feeling as I was reading.

It was mellifluous and sweet.

 
At Monday, September 07, 2009 8:00:00 PM, Blogger Tumblewords: said...

How romantic! Such lovely and touching imagery in these lines...Nice!

 
At Monday, September 07, 2009 10:20:00 PM, Anonymous gabrielle said...

Desire waxes and wanes like the moon and love endures. a beautiful passionate ode.

 
At Tuesday, September 08, 2009 11:52:00 AM, Blogger Beloved Haiku Dreams said...

Oh, I'm in love. Jim this is wonderful. Lust love your images.
Excellent my friend.


love-Melanie-bhd

 
At Tuesday, September 08, 2009 11:51:00 PM, Blogger shraddha/april@theselfloveproject said...

very romantic and sweet!!

hope you had great long weekend Jim

shraddha

 
At Wednesday, September 09, 2009 9:45:00 AM, Blogger DeLi said...

i feel thatromantic breeze jim!

 
At Wednesday, September 09, 2009 12:14:00 PM, Blogger Patti said...

I liked it- such is the romance between 2 people. And I loved the picture- very appropriate with your words~

 
At Saturday, September 12, 2009 7:38:00 PM, Blogger Sue said...

loved the rhyme. I caught a hint of a little sly fun in this.

 
At Sunday, September 13, 2009 7:44:00 AM, Anonymous Married to Singaporean said...

I like this: "Our touch and kiss then some more
right here before moon's bright light."
Perfect romance captured in the words.

 

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