Sunday, July 05, 2009

One Single Impression: The Stranger

The Stranger

He was tall dark and handsome
tall I like, handsome oh-oh
worries me the dark where come
far away those lands of woe

Him she loves top on her mind
can't be wrong with all her heart
he's so sweet gentle and kind
don't you please take us apart

Honey dear you're still so young
not for you he's much older
round the world I know his mind
just his kind makes him bolder

Slipped away the two of them
now she's lost her heart and soul
will she know heartache from him
mother's lost her only foal

Heifer's in expecting way
way too young new mom and self
oh they say sin doesn't pay
mated well swells master's pelf



Copyright © 2009 Jimmiehov. All Rights Reserved

Find more poems at One Single Impression
"The Stranger" as prompt,
suggested by Beth Patterson of
Virtual Tea House


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18 Comments:

At Sunday, July 05, 2009 12:02:00 AM, Anonymous The Dark Lord said...

Beautiful poetry.. Liked the way it started and ended.. Loved reading it!!

 
At Sunday, July 05, 2009 2:18:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

A clever take. Enjoyed that.

 
At Sunday, July 05, 2009 2:18:00 AM, Blogger Jeeves said...

Nice one.....

 
At Sunday, July 05, 2009 3:38:00 AM, Anonymous shraddha said...

very nice...

great blog :)

 
At Sunday, July 05, 2009 4:56:00 AM, Blogger spacedlaw said...

Sole?

Good and poignant story in many ways,

 
At Sunday, July 05, 2009 6:33:00 AM, Anonymous shraddha said...

very nice poetry..

 
At Sunday, July 05, 2009 7:17:00 AM, Blogger Fledgling Poet said...

Sweet and clever! I enjoyed this.

 
At Sunday, July 05, 2009 12:18:00 PM, Anonymous Pam said...

I really thought this was a love poem between humans until. . . nice twist and great sense of humor.

 
At Sunday, July 05, 2009 5:01:00 PM, Blogger Sue said...

humor -- yes. Like the dramatic build up, and the funny twist.

 
At Sunday, July 05, 2009 6:00:00 PM, Anonymous Nara Malone said...

That was sneaky saving the pictures til the end. Nice Work.

 
At Sunday, July 05, 2009 7:54:00 PM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

Written like a dad who knows. Oh to recognize the wisdom!

Jim, you're up next week with "thinking." Please send your poem and/or image to my by Friday.

 
At Monday, July 06, 2009 1:47:00 PM, Blogger gabrielle said...

sweet as clover with a surprising twist. well done!

 
At Monday, July 06, 2009 3:26:00 PM, Blogger Tumblewords: said...

Clever take on the prompt! I liked the range of this piece and the surprising turns.

 
At Tuesday, July 07, 2009 10:07:00 AM, Blogger Patois said...

Putting yourself not only in a mother's place but in an animal's? That's just mooooovelous.

 
At Tuesday, July 07, 2009 1:03:00 PM, Blogger Patti said...

I really liked that and the pictures were adorable...nice twist on the end as well~

 
At Wednesday, July 08, 2009 6:29:00 AM, OpenID fourwindshaiga said...

I wondered where that was going.

Reminds me of when my dad, who raised herefords, bought a charolais bull. We had the cutest pink and white calves!

 
At Friday, July 10, 2009 10:49:00 AM, Blogger DeLi said...

tall..dark..and handsome...i think i have heard them before :) oh those days of dreaming, and then soem waking up...but theyre all so worth learning

 
At Saturday, July 11, 2009 12:18:00 PM, Blogger Beloved Haiku Dreams said...

Jim my friend. I have been ill for a log time. Don't know if i can write and post again. I am depressed I guess.
Wanted to stop and tell you how much I enjoyed this poem. It is a puzzle within a puzzle. Well done.


love, Melanie-bd

 

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