NaPoWriMo 2018-19 -- Day 19, a Poem, Nature's Display
Waiting
Here I sit in the dark
Waiting for dawn's new day
Pity those who will miss
Spectacular display
Spring comes with season change
Lingering frost will shine
Brilliant new sun appears
Nature's display sublime
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- Picture and Poem Copyright, Jimmiehov 2007 and 2018, All Rights Reserved .
- I'm writing for Sanaa Rizvi at http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2018/04/get-listed-poems-in-april-edition.html . She is waiting too! Thank you, Sanaa, it is the day to "Get Listed." I chose frost, dawn, pity, and change as my four words from your list. And used only 35 words including my title of your maximum 100 stipulation.
- I'm also linked to Day Nineteen of NaPoWriMo, http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2018/04/day-21-mythical-creatures.html?m=1. If you click on the comments with links left or you can also try 'PARTICIPANTS SITES' link at the top of their page you can read the poems submitted by other bloggers.
Labels: Home, NaPoWriMo 2018, Real Toads, Rhyme, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 4/19/2018 10:45:00 AM
11 comments
11 Comments:
Oh this is perfect! Love the image of "Lingering frost will shine"..💞
yes, it is....!!!
Lovely time of day packed with anticipation, nice emotions conveyed
much love...
I often sit and wait for the dawn's early light. I, with Sanaa, especially like the line "Lingering frost will shine". I think there are many of us still waiting for the flowers of spring :-)
Wonderful write Jim. I love the "lingering frost will shine"
I love "waiting for dawn's new day".
Ive greeted the sunrise before she has risen a few times... I should do it more often.
hope meets patience - and then, time offers the gift! well done Jim !
Nature's display is always perfect.
Waiting pays off.... we are just having the first few warm days... which is great.
Absolutely beautiful!
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