Lilac bouquet Valentine -- a piece of prose and a poem for dVerse Prosery
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Labels: dVerse, Hip Hop Form, Love Story, Poem, Prose, Story, Story Poem, Syllabic Form
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Image by Julia Butsykina on Unsplash |
Labels: dVerse, Hip Hop Form, Love Story, Poem, Prose, Story, Story Poem, Syllabic Form
2 Comments:
I so enjoyed your Valentine’s rap, Jim! You’ve got the rhythm, the attitude and the rhymes, especially the pain, the love mixed with blood, petals ‘bright red and a bit of mud’, and the final couplet. However, as this prompt is for Prosery, I will have to remove your post from Mister Linky and ask you to add it to Open Link on Thursday, which is being hosted by Sanaa. How about joining us for Open Link Live?
Thanks, Kim, yes you must keep things propper. An aside, I don't use prose too well. Probably the "poem" name doesn't count Habians either due to the Senyru endings. I was worried that my prose part wasn't enough, I trimmed it to satisfy the 144 limit.
I'll keep the poem, try it solo elsewhere with a short note. I liked it hip hop or not.
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