Get Listed! ~~ a Seed Planting poem
Sowing Seeds; thinking about
We all know about sowing seeds
Sow, plant. Seeds germinate, grow sprouts
Water, cultivate. Plants result
Eat plants or their fruit, eater's choice
This is normal, this is God's plan
Adage is you reap what you sow
Trouble starts with faulty sowing
Bible tells "don't sow here or there"
Fables teach where not to sow. Like
"Don't sow your seeds in the desert"
Fathers have advice to garden growers
Make the soil fallow, damp, and drained
There's joy in making willing fields
Sowing sometimes has no discretion
Innocence's seeds may not grow
Whirling waters are alluring
Gyres have no bottoms, swallow seeds
Joy in sowing there is watching
Watching them swirl down through the drain
Even more (wasteful) than eating seeds
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Labels: Personal-Challenge-2017, Real Toads
9 Comments:
Trouble starts with faulty sowing.. absolutely!
https://thotpurge.wordpress.com/2017/01/27/they-said/
Ah, we'd better listen to the old wisdom.
There is so much love in your admonitions, Jim, a wonderful write
much love...
Whirling waters are alluring
Gyres have no bottoms, swallow seeds
Joy in sowing there is watching
Beautiful lines!!❤️
The word 'gyre' works well in the context of whirling waters.
May every seed bear fruit.
Adage is you reap what you sow
Trouble starts with faulty sowing
Exactly Dr Jim! One looks forward to the rewards of hard work done on the land. One hears complaints that the outcome was not to expectations - lack of green fingers
Hank
I like the allusions you made to fables and stories to strengthen the message of the piece.
I started to hum "sowing the seeds of love ... ", that would not be a waste.
Too often what is sown is to dangerous to harvest. Even in a tabernacle of weeds I find more comfort than the twisted spouting of humans.
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