Sunday Mini-Challenge ~~ a poem, Life's Ups and Downs
Life's Ups and Downs;
when will stabbleness come?
Life has its ups, life has its downs
We all like the ups, hate the downs
Chances you were born into down
Poor parents eking their living
Where was your silver spoon that day
Olden days, you're more likely down
Down where you rode in a rusting
Ford Model A's rear window shelf
Roof leaking, water pouring in
Floor boards were rotting, smoking car
Had rice and beans or bread, breakfast
Mom's cheese was making on back porch
Your doctor's bills hadn't been paid
Drove to Grandma's on Mondays
Mom would wash, you'd schmooze with Grandma
Then home, clean sheets for side porch bed
One room school beckoned you. Recite
Recite ABC's from long bench
Listen, eighth graders Poe recite
Soon you'll know "Pit and Pendulum"
By high school things might be better
Mom was working, Dad's promotion
Store bought clothes, am I now the King
Make the football team, break a leg
Seemed to be a down but then not
The kids would autograph your cast
A hero for days, Sally wrote
Then she moved away. Save your cast
Sweet Sal left, didn't go away
Every night I dreamed of Sally
(Facebook, where were you hiding then?)
I never did see her again
to be continued, more to come
(Might fill a couple of volumes
things got settled, time, older, up)
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Photo and Poem copyright, © 2016 Jimmiehov, All rights reserved
I am linked with Brendan MacOdrum at the Imaginary Garden with Real Toads, Sunday Mini-Challenge: Still Points -- http://withrealtoads.blogspot.com/2016/11/sunday-mini-challenge-still-points.html
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This poem has given me peace, not because of it's words, but that the time that I memorized it in grade school was a very peaceful time in my life:
Abou Ben Adhem
Leigh Hunt
Abou Ben Adhem (may his tribe increase!)
Awoke one night from a deep dream of peace,
And saw, within the moonlight in his room,
Making it rich, and like a lily in bloom,
An angel writing in a book of gold:—
Exceeding peace had made Ben Adhem bold,
And to the presence in the room he said,
"What writest thou?"—The vision raised its head,
And with a look made of all sweet accord,
Answered, "The names of those who love the Lord."
"And is mine one?" said Abou. "Nay, not so,"
Replied the angel. Abou spoke more low,
But cheerly still; and said, "I pray thee, then,
Write me as one that loves his fellow men."
The angel wrote, and vanished. The next night
It came again with a great wakening light,
And showed the names whom love of God had blest,
And lo! Ben Adhem's name led all the rest.
Labels: Jim's Life, Personal-Challenge-2016, Poem, School, Syllabic Form
7 Comments:
The "facebook " line made me 😁 giggle
Much love...
The beginning has the comfort of youth (may have been poor, but family rich) and the end has the angst of the teenage years :)
Mom would wash, you'd schmooze with Grandma
Then home, clean sheets for side porch bed
One room school beckoned you.
There is something comforting in the homely images.
I smiled at the reference to facebook :D beautifully penned.
And still I think there's a veneer of nostalgia here... it was probably a lot harder... maybe still is, despite Facebook
I loved the memories in this poem........times were simpler then. Looking forward to the continuation.
I grew up poor, slept on a couch for 14 years. This brings a lot of memories for me.
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