Challenge Poem (not a bah humbug)
No U-turns
I want a turn, when will my turn be?
You don't get a turn, you've been naughty
O please, let me have my turn today
Sorry fugly, there's no turn for you
No need to call me names, please refrain
That's the limit, I will hear no more
Please, please, I'll be good forever(more)
You're at the edge of my patience, go
I've done nothing to you, you're my friend
Leave, you've hit the bottom, close the door
Wheels that turn
Not a cookie cutter blog
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Photos and Poem Copyright © 2015 Jimmiehov. All Rights Reserved
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The list: reverse, corner, turn, bottom, peak, edge, limit, choose, bend, close, push, sleep (my choices are underlined)
do NOT use the words "new," "change" or "direction" (or variants / tenses derived therefrom), because bah humbug.
Today I'm linked to Grapeling's challenge, Get Listed, Solstice Edition, at The Imaginary Garden with Real Toads
Labels: Humor(?), Personal-Challenge-2015, Poem, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 12/26/2015 11:59:00 AM
5 comments
5 Comments:
A good way to remind the reader that patience with others is a virtue.
turn, turn, turn - wonderful poem, Jim.
Look at those beauties! I can almost understand the speaker that years for a turn... who wouldn't?
patience in turning and yet on it turns in any event.
ha! Jim, you've found the right 'turns' in this scolding pen. Thanks for adding your voice ~
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