Sunday, July 01, 2012

One Single Impression: Kite / Haiku Heights: True

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True Kiting
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Flying kites is joy
good therapy for parched souls
we're soaring above
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Flying kites is hell
grounded or tangled in trees
tests our tongue's control 
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Poem Copyright
© 2012 Jimmiehov
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Prompt word, 'kite,' was suggested by Ramesh Sood at A Little More Than Ordinary..
Find more poems using 'black and white' prompt word at One One Single Impression
Prompt word/topic of 'true' from Haiku Heights

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14 Comments:

At Monday, July 02, 2012 12:59:00 AM, Blogger Pranita said...

Kites, their beauty and complications!!! Very well expressed.. :)
Bloom under the moonshine
Run the length of kite!

 
At Monday, July 02, 2012 2:07:00 AM, Blogger vivinfrance said...

Two fun ones.
SPAM: if you moved to wordpress they deal with the spam for you, without action by you. Just a glance in the Spam bin from time to time to release any wrongly identified genuine comment (rare).
And a nicer bunch of bloggers you could not hope to meet!

 
At Monday, July 02, 2012 2:38:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

Ah, the two sides of the kite. nice ones.

 
At Monday, July 02, 2012 6:52:00 AM, Blogger Grace said...

I like the two perspective of flying the kite ~ Nice share ~

 
At Monday, July 02, 2012 5:27:00 PM, Blogger Magical Mystical Teacher said...

I never was a very good kite flier. Your words tell me why!


Walking True

 
At Monday, July 02, 2012 7:26:00 PM, Blogger The Write Girl said...

I like both haikus Jim. The second one brought a big smile on my face.

 
At Tuesday, July 03, 2012 11:21:00 AM, Blogger Teri Casper said...

Hey Jim, thanks for the note and nice words. Funny that you 'recognized' my painting.
I have not given up mandala making just taking a break...again. I have such trouble with Wordpress and commenting that it discouraged me. But now you have inspired me to do one. lol

I couldn't find your email so am writing this here.

 
At Tuesday, July 03, 2012 6:14:00 PM, Anonymous Blossom Vydrina said...

I've been on both sides of that spectrum :) Someday I think it would be fun to try kite photography.

 
At Wednesday, July 04, 2012 3:18:00 AM, Blogger Harshad mehta said...

Two different sides of a coin, well put here.

 
At Wednesday, July 04, 2012 3:16:00 PM, Blogger Green Speck said...

Life of kites well illustrated !!!

 
At Wednesday, July 04, 2012 8:13:00 PM, Anonymous Pam said...

Don't you just love the sound of the wind popping, cracking and singing through a kite?

 
At Wednesday, July 04, 2012 9:40:00 PM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

There are definitely two sides to the kite adventure! We must take the risk, though....

 
At Thursday, July 05, 2012 8:33:00 AM, Blogger Sandra said...

smart view...thanks Jim!

 
At Saturday, July 07, 2012 1:17:00 PM, Blogger gabrielle said...

Reminds me of the Judy Collins song,
I've looked at life from both sides now. And still somehow--(after spitting out a few expletives, or some quiet rumination)--we untangle the string and run with it again.
Clever and amusing haiku!

 

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