One Single Impression: Black and White
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Throes of Love;Shades of Doubt
saying you love me so
do you tell me the truth
black and white, shades of gray
I can feel your passion
fully I share your joy
wondering will you stray
still I do feel better
hearing you really care
come what I'm here to stay
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Prompt, 'black and white,' was suggested by Leo at I Rhyme Without Reason
Find more poems using 'black and white' prompt word
at One One Single Impression
Labels: Loose Rhyme, One-Single-Impression, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 5/19/2012 11:57:00 PM
9 comments
9 Comments:
This was really good. great depth to it.
This is good. Black, white or gray, what matters is -- I am here to stay.
Touching, gritty and realistically true. Well done!
I think last line says it all..
sweet words!!
That's love for ya! Great poem, Jim.
There are always those shades of gray to contend with! :) Very well done.
Love would be simpler if it was only black and white but there are many shades of gray. Nicely written Jim.
Absolutely, your commitment means much more than any colors on display - you are "here to stay".
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