One Single Impression: Elusive (an acrostic poem)
E L U S I V E
Everyday finds him in hiding
Loveless lonely fellow is he
Unpsent his passions are crying
Save these feelings they yearn for she
Into love's dim humble lighting
Vanity is no more to be
End is well he's now inviting
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Prompt word, 'Elusive,' was suggested by Karen at Something Written
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Labels: Acrostic, One Single Impression, One-Single-Impression, Poem, Rhyme, Syllabic Form
posted by Jim @ 4/29/2012 04:16:00 PM
13 comments
13 Comments:
An amazing acrostic!
A deep and soulful piece.
This is so tender, emotional, and heartfelt. I think one of my favorite's Jim.
A state of depression? Hope he overcomes it soon. Very emotional piece.
Oh, my heart breaks for him.
charming place :)
very good Jim! sad but so touching.
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I love the photo and the words.. Have a great day!
Patsy
Such a sad piece. I really liked the description "love's dim humble lighting," such wonderful imagery.
Very good acrostic, Dr Jim :)
beautiful acrostic
"Elusive" and "exclusive" were on my mind lately :)
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