Sunday, April 29, 2012

One Single Impression: Elusive (an acrostic poem)



  E L U S I V E

Everyday finds him in hiding
Loveless lonely fellow is he
Unpsent his passions are crying
Save these feelings they yearn for she
Into love's dim humble lighting
Vanity is no more to be
End is well he's now inviting

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© 2012 Jimmiehov
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Prompt word, 'Elusive,' was suggested by Karen at Something Written
Find more poems using 'Elusive' prompt word
at One One Single Impression

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13 Comments:

At Sunday, April 29, 2012 7:52:00 PM, Blogger Karen said...

An amazing acrostic!

 
At Monday, April 30, 2012 2:54:00 AM, Blogger anthonynorth said...

A deep and soulful piece.

 
At Monday, April 30, 2012 10:29:00 PM, Blogger The Write Girl said...

This is so tender, emotional, and heartfelt. I think one of my favorite's Jim.

 
At Wednesday, May 02, 2012 5:45:00 AM, Blogger Harshad mehta said...

A state of depression? Hope he overcomes it soon. Very emotional piece.

 
At Wednesday, May 02, 2012 8:45:00 PM, Blogger SandyCarlson said...

Oh, my heart breaks for him.

 
At Thursday, May 03, 2012 10:01:00 AM, Blogger Tina´s PicStory said...

charming place :)

 
At Thursday, May 03, 2012 2:34:00 PM, Blogger Geraldine said...

very good Jim! sad but so touching.

 
At Thursday, May 03, 2012 2:35:00 PM, Blogger Geraldine said...

PS: Jim, I've got a cookbook contest on right now, you (your wife too!) might want to check out. stop by My Real Life Reviews to enter.

 
At Thursday, May 03, 2012 3:19:00 PM, Blogger Pblacksaw said...

I love the photo and the words.. Have a great day!
Patsy

 
At Friday, May 04, 2012 12:20:00 PM, Blogger Tracy Crenshaw said...

Such a sad piece. I really liked the description "love's dim humble lighting," such wonderful imagery.

 
At Sunday, May 06, 2012 7:05:00 AM, Blogger audrey` said...

Very good acrostic, Dr Jim :)

 
At Friday, May 11, 2012 9:21:00 AM, Blogger Neha said...

beautiful acrostic

 
At Wednesday, May 16, 2012 8:51:00 PM, Blogger audrey` said...

"Elusive" and "exclusive" were on my mind lately :)

 

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